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AGE:
29
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 25
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 25
I have been afraid to share my writings…..until now. I need to feel a connection to those who share my passion. I am an extroverted intovet who like to push the envelope before licking it. tehehe
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I can't sit still- I can't contain the fire burning like the heat of a thousand eternities Nothing to slake the unending thirst Corporeal, emotional, mental All senses pushing me like tyrants over the edge, into the abyss and I can't help but drown in your heady, all-consuming presence and all I can do is cry; all I can do is ache - and yield completely to the everything that is you
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There is a beautiful snow in the field It drapes across the land A marvelous tablecloth White purity; Arms, lips, mind pulled on the embrace Its alabaster majesty Fulfilled am I with such longing As nothing to compare The radiant fullness of Its abundance Reaching out across the breadth and depth of Its sole and complete dominion And I dared not hover to long on the spot - Heat burned longing and despair To cauterize the wounds Of my affliction Suffering from the agony unending Melting the s...
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The heavens can not proclaim a sweeter melody than that of your voice. It caresses my spirit and draws me ever closer to you. My lips lingering on the moistness of your skin. The taste of you evokes a desire I've never felt before. The scent of you becons the passions from deep within and I tremble at the gentleness of your caressing touch.........pure ecstacy.... pulling from the depths of my soul a love that has no bounds........ a love that is all encompasing. All the love that has ever ex...
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I want to feel you intensely. As deliberate as rain. To feel the sleek heat and sultry loving glide of flesh over flesh. I thirst for your kisses, I hunger for your touch. Never have I known such a sensual merging of body with body, heat with heat, breath with breath. To feel all control being stripped away by the sweet rhythms of such pleasure. You take my breath away.
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Every day all day, in everything we do, I want to make love to you. the ordinary things become a dance of lovers. A glance over a coffee cup first thing in the morning. the feel of you behind me as I wash the dishes and your hands cover mine in sweet caress's the making and unmaking of the bed, words shown , but never said.. I want to make love to you in our every day ordinary way, Every day all day, in everything we do, I want to make love to you. To cuddle on the couch and not watch TV, To ...
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Tis life.....is it not ??? I like this reminds me of the lesson I learned as a child when watching the christmas show about Santa Claus and the wizzard who lost his powers when his heart of ice was melted, and he had to learn to walk...."Put one foot in front of the other".... I like this one !!
There are lines that work extremely well and there are some...."I" think could be altered or cut altogether. I think the second line would be an excellent way to start this poem. (alter or do away with the first) Line 7 may read better "the sound of guns, the sound of war". The sad part is that such a young soul ha such an awsomely accurate sensabiliy.
Very good painting. I like the picture you set forth here.... I know many sparrows who have looked to me to be there springtime amid their storms. Really nice.
This is a tricky one, hahaha What he should have said is........... "..............fans know I believe in what I’m about. That’s what should be important." But since he did not......yeah he's an ass!
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