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AGE: 21
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Hello. I am a 21 year old college student. I have a few poems made and they might be posted up with time. I make my poems when I have a line in my head and I want to create something to go along with it. They normally dont take longer than 30 minutes to make either. Most of the poems are made from observing the world and how things turn out to be, not so much from experience; although, my poems do tend to be dark in nature.

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Poetry / An Ending
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Like a curtain it falls as the fog settles darkness penetrates the mind mantaining a state of trance of innocent intentions. The whispers subside as the time approaches while silence breaks hearts of precious momentums forgotten in time. And as the embers wither so the tears dwindle in a soul forsaken at last by the many loves it grew and cherrished little. (M.U. February 03,2006)
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Poetry / An Observation
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Search for a creation an empty reflection vanity to the surface abandoning all grace. Barrel to the mirror ending to the horror stop on the track bit of choke back. Watch time escape all loose shape no lasting fear ring in your ear. In a vengence game no source to blame an enemy of the mind no reason left behind. Empty hand shakes closed window breaks dead silence erupts so reason corrupts. Sky tainted red a world misled all heroes forgot for hearts have rot. (M.U. July 10, 20006)
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All the time in the world but not enough for me as life circles by me for I'm in a stand-still. And much like a soldier I look to the future and wonder restlessly "what will become of me?" For in the dead of night I pray to be someone that won't be forgotten in the quicksands of time. As I find I'm lost in a world of sheep and wolves where the reflections laugh along with the owner's cry. With a sigh I wish truth in the hopes for my life to be happy through out until the gates close in. (M.U....
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Poetry / Untitled
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Surrounded by darkness passing through my shadows lost in my madness stalked by all the crows like widows at the gallows. Dead all the days became ever-after murdered with myself to blame all souls tainted red a lethal dose of hatred. Hunted by my demons for the closets won't close deaf from all the sermons what would you propose as they kill all my purpose? The sun no longer shines rebelling from the shame spiritual machines it is all a game as we all down in the flame. A fork encountered on...
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Poetry / War
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I watch the river flow amongst mountains that were not there yesterday as flesh and bones corrode the earth that feeds us and grieves us. I watch the grass grow through metal and stone for the ground has turn grey to match the dark clouds that shadows all our dreams and our fears. And the moon mirrors hope for our doom soon shall be fullfiled with pray that this fray will erase at last everything we owe. I watch the lights glow as the earth shatters for this is the last day I will let this fe...
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The poem at first seems to be a recollection of how the metaphor of "the colours" could have been the saviours from the darkness; but in the second stansa, it seems to be a plea for the colours to be a salvation. The way they contradict eachother threw me off, but beyond that, the emotions of despair and regret are well depicted.
Poetry / To our avail.
The poem over all is very well layed outand a very well set out pase. I dont really know what I feel when I read it but it is like I know exactly what is being evoked. The best lines are "im no good at this / being we" and "because im no good / at racking leaves." They are the major points in the poem that gives that sense of truthfulness and of sadness as well. Very well done over all.
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