Celebrity news stole my work ethic. Nice, light hearted, made me smile!

I take this as a "learn from my mistakes" statement. But WAY less contrived. I love it. I can almost hear it in a romantic comedy.

A sad 6 words. I think a lot of women loose their true selves to the roles they take on. At least you're writing. I feel like that is for you.

this makes me think of the scene in Austin Powers just after they thaw him out. Very nice, brought a smile to my face.

Its hard to write a constructice review on a piece as concise as this. It makes me feel akin to you, and possibly every other writer. We are expressing who we are while still trying to figure it out for outselves.

a good start but...doesn't follow limerick form. Limerick form is AABBA, and I think there are too many syllables in the final line. Other than the form the concept is amusing and humorous.

Some beautiful imagery, "a single tear of sweat roll from the concave peak of her armpit and trace its way through the hidden canyons on her skin..." is just stunning. And I wanted to read "His fingers traced impermanent complex figures in the gently cooling water" over and over again. Not because of readibility, I just found it so visual, and nice to read aloud. Nice work.

I don't know how quotable this is, but as a 6 word memoir its great. Very to the point, very clear, very relatable.

I'm not sure I completly understand this. What I'm getting from it is a beautiful, emotive piece about an eating disorder. The idea of using animals to describe the stomach is wonderful and unique. Your writing style is clear and fluid. This is a pleasure to read aloud, its as though the words propel themselve off the tongue.