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AGE:
46
LOC: Red Rock, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 15
LOC: Red Rock, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 15
I am not nor claim to be an established writer. I write from my heart without thought of style, flow, nouns, verbs, punctuation. I write what i feel in my heart and thats where i leave it.
IT would be like a therapist telling me, “Can you rephrase that feeling with proper style, grammar. When you speak from you heart you loose proper verse.”
I appreciate your reviews/responses o anything I post. I share in hopes that I will touch someone, help someone get throught a rough time. Thanks to all who read and respond. God Bless.
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Net in hand chasing butterflies, Each missed catch to her surprise. Jeans and boots with golden curls, Giggles and smiles with every twirl. Shrilling shrieks fill her laughter, Catching the one she's been after. Her puppy yapping at her heels, Free to play in the open fields. Proudly watching from my swing, A true blessing she does bring. Conceived in love of another time, We're now alone every nursery rhyme. A gift to cherish from above, Precious angel so filled with love. Trusting me to mak...
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hello, are you there? The missing half of my pair. I have been praying for you. Maybe you are finally in view. Excitedly does my heart leap. Possible this time it will reap. Truth in love i do seek. Is that you? Please a little peek. All day thinking am I the light you seek in your sky? Baby, just open your heart. Such a wonderful place to start. I leap towards maybe. No need to pursade me. Anticpating your call, I am ready to fall. Are you excited as me? Maybe its meant to be. Tired of the s...
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Thoughts are filled with visions of you. Bringing hope to carry me through. Missing a man I have not yet met. Dreams and wishes bring hope, not regret. The moment we meet, how it will be? I fall asleep, imaging you next to me. Head on your shoulder, hand on your chest. Your heartbeats beneath my palm, love at its best. Caressing warmth from your breath and kisses. Overwhelms my heart and its wishes. Embraced in your arms, a soft place I do seek. No looking glass in sight reveals a peek. Possi...
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The ARMED FORCES positioned themselves in enemy territory. Strategically awaiting the arrival of their target. Much delight warmed them as it entered and aligned in their scope. Smirk sweet satisfaction filling their black hearts. Machine guns loaded with their ammo of choice. High power cruelty with spiteful purpose easily fired. Overpowering their target as they riddle it with betrayal. The Sergeant at Arms and his drunk Private finally implemented their revenge. The Sergeant had posed as a...
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Turbulent rumbles approach Lightning seen in a darkening sky Rains bring change of season Night exists with turmoil, Morning with light Brisk autumn blows through screens My mind brisk by the nip in air Storms brewed this change I can now remember my name I am chaotic as I appear Thunder, rain and the wind Scattering drops clear the storm Rainbows now replace the dark Lit with a colorful heart. Written by Linda C.
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Not sure where you intended this peice to go. I see it as one who has subjected to the drug induced loss of dreams. Reality of his own selfishness desires have come to late for redemption on earth. I am not a critic nor would i. My view is that everyone writes and who are we to critique it then whats the point in writing. ITs our own expression and feelings. thanks for sharing
What i read is someone who set out on a particular venture. The goal was actually set late. This in turn has made one relfect in all that was seen on the walk to the original journey. To me it resembles the old saying of "Take time to smell the roses.". As we hurry through life for our own goals and dreams sometimes we forget the little things that bring others delight. They dont need a hit song, a big house, a snow laden hill, all that is needed to have a light heart is whats in front of us....
I reread your story quite a few times. I am trying to see what the dog and the roaches symbolize. Once I think its the "dt's" but you clarify its not. Maybe its symbolic to the disease that one cannot control. The dog is the liver and the roaches are the disease that will continue to spew from it into the body which is the room you sit. Definitely see the denial that he is not an alcoholic. In the end, possibly he sees that he waited to long to get control of the drinking and no matter if he ...
Wow....what an intriguing peice. I knew where it was going, but my hopful romantic instict begged it to not be true. I am not a fan of horror. This peice is filled with love however eerie that sounds. The romance, the attentive detail to welcoming her. Even in her death he loves her. He has made her his for eternity and this is why he believes he has won. The feelings he had for her never die, as she has. Again, Wow. Very well written. A great read even for one who is not into horror. Would l...
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