Calingaladha's profile
AGE:
17
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 21
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 21
I’m 15 years old, and I originally hail from the distant, mountain-ridged land of Colorado, in the far west, past the Great River which divides the land mass.
I enjoy such things as reading, writing, interacting with animals, anime, the Japanese language, watching Animal Planet, singing, drawing, classic Disney,and playing my clarinet and/or bass clarinet.
My favorite color is sea green, my favorite shape is the pop can, my main religion is agnosticism, and I am often known as queen of randomnosity.
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Glued eternal to my book pages.
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Glued eternal to book pages.
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Nature grasped me by the hands.
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Music still makes my blood flow.
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The King, he sat upon his chair, To us, it was his throne. The smells of feasts were in the air, the sounds of harper's tone. The Queen, she sat beside him, and watched the serfs at dance. This masquerade was not grim, as Lords and Ladies pranced. The Princess was alone, and shy, her hair adorned with gold. Too timid, she, to even try, a dance--she wasn't bold. The Prince, he stifled many yawns, Quite plainly, he was bored. Weary, he falls asleep to dawn, His hand laid on his sword. The guest...
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Heh. This definitely made me laugh. Nice work on the word choice, though I was hoping for a different ending. :P
Very nice. Fitting too, because this is the question that I think everyone wants the answer to, but few are ever very certain of. Good luck!
I like it. Simple, yet leaves more to be said, and clever wording for a bit of a chuckle. Good luck!
Cute, perhaps, but the rythym is shaky. You might do with cutting out a few syllables. Other than that, I do like it.
The structure of this piece made it read broken. I'm not sure if that made much sense, but the line breaks make it seem jumpy, like a sharp breath in the middle. As far as rhyming goes, it doesn't seem forced, and that is a good achievement, but you could make some use of a spell-checker (just don't forget to manually proofread as well--computers can't catch everything.)
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