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AGE:
21
LOC: La Habra, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 13
LOC: La Habra, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 13
my name is jon wayne and i am a 15 year old high school kid who knows who he is while he sees everyone else change before him, i write poems to let my feelings out…and it helps
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We don't cry because we are sad, we don't. We cry because we don't understand.
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it was inspiring millions and millions...of all the dawns; i wringed them of beauty just to soak in it perhaps massage my scalp in the heaven my toes set camp amoung the grains and cooled;and blew a frizzy morning i was planted and i felt home it was here, it was the seascapes spanning a film of memory it was the calmings of wind journeys it was the dry mind and the dampened soul the dirty foam and the clean skin of the ocean it was here but my eyes were always fixed, and blinded, and Tranced...
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1. air s a filler acting a numb slayer slicing lungs 2. dirt is encryption frump-no, slump scape ;Godly. 3. eyes on top of the world...view bottomly as statuesque radars 4. humane humans non-existant; prefixes trick 5. Mr. Finn does good deeds with Sharp[ie] tongues (presently so) 6. ties tight knot sewn with power cloth bred for trumpery
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It's the Truman Show all over again it seems they're reading lines for me it seems they starched their smiles they walk with perfect paces, performing a friendly goose step in honor of me they walk with clouds, floating effortlessly over the unneeded pavement they walk with hips, making their legs.knees.feet.toes.brain obsolete they walk with jittering hands, that perform puppetteer's work they walk with agile necks, that can spin too fast and they do not walk they seat me on the comphiest co...
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I crawl upon the ones of tens of hundreds of Lavander's work, be it leaf or petal, be it pleaf or letal Sapphire may be in our veins but smooth a ruby look-a-like It is the job of glaciers to mother and they will abandon us All respecting spartan sportists will leave post All chosen leaders will blow smoke All pastures will upside-dead All choirsmen are tools in Satan's shed God forbid a change as the Lavander's brown up and my crawl is made crunch God forbid
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this was a pretty nice piece, on paper, that is... i really didn't become entranced in your diction, perse, it was a little dry, the words you use, very simpla and boring in their demener, so that didn't really help the piece, i think you could rewrite this with much more imagery and creative word choice and this would be a pretty good piece, but as of now, its not exactly my cup of tea
that is the persona of selfish dependency , that shows that you dont care about the suffers of the ones around you, but you can see it the other way around , how it doesnt effect you , if thats the way you ment it . . . maybe you ment it in a way of if they never met you in their life, and you could see them unaffected, thats a totally different manner , but the toher way, thats a selfish cause , not putting you downt or anything, but that is what i get right off the bat from reading this . ....
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