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AGE: 18
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
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Short Story / Prey
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It was dark, the kind of dark where even the moon and the stars can’t shine, choked by thick clouds. The kind of dark that evil commands, where creatures lurk behind every corner and haunt every shadow. The kind of dark that Tersa longed for, but dreaded all the same.   She was dressed in black, knowing that it wouldn’t make any difference when it mattered, but still feeling safer than she would have dressed in any other colour. Her belt was strung with objects that might hav...
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Short Story / Hospital
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Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Except for the cries of a few patients sleeping restlessly, the STAIR ward of the psychiatric centre was completely silent. The young intern could hear the ticking of the clock on the wall four metres away, and shivered as she patrolled the cold linoleum floors of the hospital’s corridors.   It was Anna’s first night shift, and so far she wasn’t enjoying it.   As she crept along the corridor, peering in windows and checking on a fe...
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Short Story / Hospital
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Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Except for the cries of a few patients sleeping restlessly, the STAIR ward of the psychiatric centre was completely silent. The young intern could hear the ticking of the clock on the wall four metres away, and shivered as she patrolled the cold linoleum floors of the hospital’s corridors.   It was Anna’s first night shift, and so far she wasn’t enjoying it.   As she crept along the corridor, peering in windows and checking on a fe...
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Short Story / Beautiful
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He wakes us before sunrise, smiling as he makes breakfast. We sit in the lessening dark and I listen to them talk, he and his little girl. She hangs on his every word, studying his smile as though she knows it's only put on. But it's put on for her, and so he never falters, never looks away from her huge blue eyes. We eat on the rooftop, watching as the sunrise leaks over the horizon, with his girl snuggled between us, using our bodies for warmth. From up here we can see the world as it is; t...
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Poetry / The Serial Lover
This is quite beautiful. In a morbid, creepy way. I think that the words you have used really emphasise the destructive nature of the female character and her state of mind. I'm not much of a reader of poetry because it usually doesn't interest me too much, but I must say, this really held my attention. You have a lovely poetic voice which reaches into darker elements seamlessly. However, I can't give you much of a critique because I'm not a poetry expert. I would love to read more of your wo...
Novel Treatments / The Demon Lover Chapter 25
Coming into this story just now, it was a little confusing for me, but what I read has really made me want to read the rest! I think the characters are quite interesting and the setting was original and well-developed. As far as the Angel/Karim interaction went, I think maybe you could have heightened Karim's possessiveness and made his lust for her more obvious... although I understood the danger and seductiveness of him, it didn't seem like he was involved enough in the relationship. Howeve...
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