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Growing ruminant; observing, writing, then weeping.
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The sun of Lucifer emerges on the twilit horizon. My hunched, leafless body stays numb on the erected bedrock, In the mezzo of the Godforsaken Atlantis of expulsion. Elbows on knees and a hand on the chin; Will He quell our planned wedlock? Why, when I gaze down at the hooded mistress of Ebony, do I see myself in her? To my right there are bushes of red-eyed fists punching forward like the gears of the Titanic. Onto the bedrock where my frail bottom is confined, lays the sleeping sister of Sa...
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What a strongly emotion-ridden poem! the personal voice gives power to this poem. I don't really consider myself to be good at poem critiques, am still improving, learning to look and think in all areas of poetry, although i love to write poetry. As i was reading, i was thinking maybe you could add some imagery to show and illustrate how psychotic you would consider urself to be ( that is, if that is what you are saying in the poem) also what provokes such thoughts and breeds this insanity? T...
this is a good memoir to write in 6 words! the line itself is so true. People read all sorts of texts: books, magazines, reviews, etc. They all in many ways reflect the times and conditions of our lives as well as create realities different or not so different from our own. They provoke thought, examination, and imagination, as well as inform. Good job! :-)
This quote should be published in a book that offers quotes about art; what it means to people and what it truly takes to be one! In just 10 words, i see you have taken in contemplation of what it should take to be an artist and the sort of "ignition" one may need in order to know for him/herself whether or not they have artistic skills! Correct me if im wrong, but drawing from the words you have chosen, you feel this "madness", a drive that instinctfully brings out your best artwork, in that...
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