CassChavez's profile
AGE:
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LOC: Jackson, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 20
LOC: Jackson, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 20
my name is cass im a 16yr old student i have alot of freetime so i started this profile to share all of my thoughts s others can read and share what they think.
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"she is my bright shining star in a lonely sky of mystery"
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todays world is coming to a cold winter stillness, peoples hearts are cold as stone. routines take over lives that were once filled with happiness. we walk the same paths now, speak the same words now, and think the same thoughts. Yet some of us tend to stray away and share our true emotion. some of us tend to share our true hearts.We are the kind of people who tend to live instead of hide.
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walking the isles of this world, wondering what material item i should purchase next to settle my pathetic need of self satisfaction. question floods my mind wondering how my pathetic style puts a film of a false image on my life. i often spend MY life hiding, hiding behind these vintage routines and underground adventures. soon enough i will recognize myself and shed this fake image, someday ill be the real child i desire to be.
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tongith i wonder how long will we be together.my mind races as i lay next to you in youre bed. we gaze aimlessly at the tv. we soon look into eachothers eyes and start t whisper cheesey love lines. we try to hide our words from you parents ears who lay in their own bed across the hall. our typical teen love thrives as we start to wonder who will kiss who first. now this story ends as it may.
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the ending was a little hard to understand i think you could have extended it out a few more lines to make the ending really stand out. The rhyming was good it wasnt sensless like some of the work i see from other people on this sight. well done keep writing.
this is a confusing pice yet it does actuly have a point to it unlike the other crap writings people put on this site good job b ut it could use a little bit more length to it.
this is an awsome piece sometimes i see the world like this when im in bad times. i dont think there is much you can do to this piece to make it much better because it is allready great so keep writing.
this was a great poem i love how you describe everything into great detail and my favorite line would definatly havce to be "the greys in my hair or so ive been told are lines of wisdom and wont make me old. its a great piece but it could maybe be longer.
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