The hours/equipment thing I can understand. The rest of it just sounds like whining, and weakens your letter.

One of the better ones. Enjoyable.

Kind of vague for a criticism.

I understand the first half only.

You know...you _can_ delete things rather than leave them posted to clutter up the queue.

Graphic and chilling. A good piece.

What a great characterization! A nice look at the complexities present in these tiny people. Congratulations on the milestone. :)

It's an interesting setup. The relationship between the father and daughter is intriguing. The fight scene started off well, but kind of got a little unbelievable by the end: 1/100th of a second gives no time to dodge a bullet. It's not entirely clear if Trish is a relative or friend. A few mechanical errors: "Andy is to busy" - too "for the Irish mafia his one mission" - comma after mafia "who was Peter dad" - comma after Peter; capitalize Dad "it made a metallic clunking sound" - to me, 'cl...

"What is all this information building up to if not omniscience?" I think subatomic physics is God’s practical joke at those who would aspire to omniscience. :) Excellent essay; I would like to see it expanded. It borders on some of the same thoughts presented by Asimov, Bradbury, Heinlein, and Brin. One tiny nit: “We can no more deny it then we can…” should be ‘than.’

Not bad...a look at the awkwardness of adolescence and the spillover into adult life without too much angst-y self-loathing. I like that the ending shows determination and optimism. Good luck!