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AGE:
59
LOC: Buda, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 19
LOC: Buda, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 19
I began writing fiction when I was thirteen and have published newsletters, news stories, reviews, poetry and short stories. My Actor’s Guild Paranormal Mystery Series has been accepted for publication by Mystic Moon Press and the first two books in the series are out.
In addition to writing, I am an artist, photographer and beaded jewelry designer.
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I’ve loved you in silence, though my passions never slept. I’ve kissed you in my soul while my heart its secrets kept. I’ve come to you in darkness when your soul called out to mine, Shielded you with my essence in a place outside of time. In dreams I’ve been your lover, I’ve touched your secret parts. I’ve basked in your warmness and given you all my heart. I’ve lain with you at daybreak on a bed of silken hay, Overcome with emotion and the words I dared not say. So why is it, I wonder, all ...
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Where shall I stand the hour before I come to knock at Heaven’s door? And what others’ eyes shall see Visions of the angels who come for me? I know it not, but I believe God waits on high, souls to receive. Therein holds a time of tender bliss For the soul who perceives visions like this. What solace, comfort to behold That greatest mystery to unfold And enter into sacred rest Having passed through life’s final test! What limitless seas of love untold Lie waiting there, yet to behold! But hol...
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One would think living in the South all my life would have spared me somewhat from the great southward migration, but no. I find myself an unwilling and distraught prisoner in this ever-increasing saggy-baggy, wrinkled wash and wear costume I call my body. When you grow up a bit overweight as I did, you are accustomed to cellulite and floppy “places” where other young things have tight buns and thighs and firm, bouncy pert “blossoms” and yet, when I was younger, everything had a place and it...
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This Roger Haynes was a psychotic guy! Yikes! I thought I would croak the fifth or so time he "digressed"! You captured his essence very well, and I hated--and pitied--him through and through. As for Paul Smith? Who's to say? A man as delusional as Roger could have imagined the entire thing. Maybe Paul was innocent? At any rate, I found this rambling to be fascinating. The mind of man is so complex and scattered sometimes. I was convinced Roger was thoroughly deranged and that he was complete...
This might be an interesting story, but it has so many errors in punctuation it is hard to tell. I can't tell where it is going and I have a lot of questions you aren't answering. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, because it is a good technique to grab someone's attention if you confuse them. However, I do think if you want good reviews on this you need to stop and take the time to make it right first. Keep writing! I see a lot of potential here, but I feel you can do better.
This is a little eerie! I like it, but it is surprising the way it ends. Overall, I like the last stanza, but I think the last line might be a bit superfluous. I write some poetry myself, when the mood strikes, but I don't claim to be any kind of expert at it, so anything I say may or may not be good advice. Mechanically, I would work on the punctuation a bit. Those little dots and such are such a bother and what to do with them will vary with each new person who critiques you, but I like the...
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I have to apologize because I can't find anything at all interesting or captivating in this chapter. To me it seems tedious, though I feel if I "knew" these characters it might not be. As you say, this is in part two in the book, and so much about what is happening here depends on what went before. I find myself asking too many questions (about what went before--who are these two, how did the come together, why is he so hard to seduce? That is certainly NOT a normal male characteristic, at le...
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