Charlie's profile
AGE:
43
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 16
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 16
I’m a writer living and working in Brooklyn, New York. Some of my work has appeared on Thievesjargon, 3711atlantic, Underground Voices and an upcoming anthology of writing called ‘In Our Own Words, A Generation Speaks: Volume VI.’
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A Blind Site In the first hours of light, sitting on the desk across from the bed, the computer screen veiled a blank, innocuous paroxsysm of glass, metal and plastic-- hardly the vessel of pain, destruction, mayhem and death that it had become in the nights previous to the one just passed. Let me start at the beginning, though each time I tell this story the beginning seems to recede further into my own personal past, a period rife with inactivity and known chiefly by the general malaise of ...
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Emily For the last two days Emily had waited for a call from the agency where she’d interviewed for a clerical position that paid a fraction of what she’d been earning on the street. The interview had gone well, with her responding in a practiced manner to the questions about the large gap in her employment history. The story she’d rehearsed with Anne, her employment counselor at the halfway house where she’d been living since getting out of jail, had been seamless. She’d returned to her nat...
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Haley Standing outside a restaurant, Haley spotted an umbrella blooming from the open door of a cab stopped at the near corner, followed by the unfolding frame of a woman struggling to remove a trolling file case from the back seat. Behind him the door to the restaurant opened. "Mr. Haley. Why you no come inside?" "I'll be right in Miguel. Tell Barney to mix up a pitcher for me. You do that?" “Sure Mr. Haley.” Haley turned back to the street as the cab pulled into traffic, stopping at the lig...
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I assume this is a description of some sort of dismemberment, but it seems to be deliberately vague, going to great legnths to be imprecise with one wordy description after another of simple actions. There are many clumsy constructions using odd imagery meant to be witty ways of saying simple things. What we have here is one clunky, unlikely image after another-- an attempt to be original that ends up simply ambiguous at best and meaningless at worst. It's interesting that this writer chose t...
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There are so many strained rhymes in this poem that I cannot possibly name them all here without rewriting most of the poem. The entire poem follows a corny, simple rhyme scheme that does not serve to do anything but put one in mind of a cheesy Hallmark greeting card. I guess the poem is about the author's vague, unnameable disatisfaction with life-- but there is no concrete reason given for that disatisfaction. There is just flowery language, words that seem to have been chosen simply becaus...
First thing- Didn't the narrator already meet and see who Deuce is in the first scene where he's waiting to cop, talking to Nate, admiring his knife? So, why the surprise on the part of the narrator later when Johnny reveals that he's Deuce? That I don't understand. Maybe you can clear that up for me. Now. Ahem. The whole junkie thing, the story of the drug addict, it's a powerful subject for fiction because of the already built-in drama with any story about any junkie; we have withdrawal and...
This was a fine read. The nature of the narrator seemed modern, though the critique of the ancient, hypocritical stance of the pharisee could have been writen back in the past as well. Though I am wanting in my old testament scholarship, I was able to comprehend the gist of the poem's meaning in terms of the narrator's warning to the pharisee that he can see through the "showy" stance of the so-called religious man, who is actually a hubristic hypocrite. As far as the poetic style, the rhythm...
Very cool story. The taking of a random incident-- like a young woman getting hit by a bus and a car-- and narrating it from the point of view of several minor characters, gives the action a variety of meanings. To the news anchor, the young woman's death is just another abstract item scrolling down the teleprompter; a name and an event with no real connection to his own life, the details about which (divorce, familial disharmony), while sad and depressing, come off as a little bit cliche. Th...
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