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LOC: Las Vegas, NV
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LAST LOGIN: October 27
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 27
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Summer Dominique Chapter 1 – I’m In Love With A Stripper I don’t remember whose idea it was, maybe it was mine. Somehow it came about that me and all the fellas would ride out to San Francisco for my eighteenth birthday to hit a strip club called The Crazy Horse. That came out to be three full carloads of horny young men, storming a strip club like S.W.A.T. on a pussy raid. I did everything I could to prepare myself. I put on my nicest outfit, gathered up all my tips from my job waiting table...
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Like A King An Alternative Romance Novel Dedication I thank God for the muse it let stay with me throughout every word within this book. I felt its presence and I know it was it and not me that is responsible for this collaboration of words that somehow before my eyes formed a novel. I feel blessed to be deemed the author. To every woman who has loved a man, and created within herself a place that he could always come home to. You are the Promised Land. May you continue to flow with milk and ...
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When our love lived, we lived it together When it died, I had to suffer it alone It was a slow and painful death I tried to medicate the pain with women, drungs & alcohol But that only prolonged the suffering The pain would lie in wait till I was sober again Then attack my soul Eat at my mind with memories of you To the point where the loss of you tortured me Enough to make me want to end my life My loveless life But yet here I am Alive and well Granted... the love we shared still survives in...
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Do you know who you are? I feel I must let you know You're the dirt, and the rain, and the light that makes growth In the home of your womb is the essence of all thing You're the mother of nature, the supremest of beings Do you know who you are? I'm hardly worthy to say You're the night to the sky, and the light to the day You're the sun and the stars and the moon to the earth You're everything to this world, without you there's no birth Do you know who you are? Must I continue on Everynight ...
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I dwell on curiousity and wonder what you would have been The possibilities are so infinite I can't even imagine Was it death that took you away Hopefully not Some say A being doesn't have a soul until it takes it's first breath But I saw you Twice in fact Through technology and ultrasounds And you seemd real to me Real enough to make me temporarily a happy father At that point I couldn't imagine putting a stop to your birth Cause there you were Clearly trying to create yourself A form being ...
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It started off sounding like my type of read. I like nasty stuff, exotic and erotic words. I like how I was mislead in the beginning. The words were such like those I perfer that I thought there was something more sexual and passionate happenening then just coffee at a coffee house. It died down after that though and got too deep... the dialog I mean. I guess it's one of the benefits of writing, you can make your characters speak anyway you please. Maybe I don't hang around with enough "enlig...
“Shannon.” He corrected. That was funny. Anyway, this was a good read. It read quickly to me. Even though there were a lot of grammar mistakes... A LOT. I was able to look past them and concentrate on the story. I seems very chick orientated to me. I think a lot of women would dig this. It's seems to me, starting like a "Waiting To Exhale" type book. But don't get me wrong, I was about 13 or 14 when I read waiting to exhale and I liked it a lot. I think the key for you is to make whatever com...
okay... forgive me for this... but in all fairness I will blame this review on the fact that I have only read this one chapter which is very into the book so maybe I don't have the proper connection with the characters or story. Anyway, I thought it was boring, sorry. The romance wasn't very romantic and the story just seems boring. I didn't feel any passion or tension in this short scene between David and Carolyn and honestly, by the time the scene was over I was just reading big groups of w...
This poem just made me think of something. I do the same thing also so I am not judging you in this area. But why is it that we all associate so much negativity with romance. I would think to classify a poem a romance it should be about falling in love, but we all so often instead write about losing love. What does it say about us that we associate so much victimization with romance... or love... or are they not the same thing? A teacher asks a young girl to write about love and she'll write ...
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