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AGE: 35
LOC: Brazil
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 07

I’m Itacaregaucho, I’m write a Sanumá tale. Chivitos is my nick name to show my stories in Portuguese and Spanish to readers repair!
Enjoy tales about forest and your spirits!
Thanks!

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Short Story / El Cazador y la Muerte
Version 1
5 Reviews   0 Comments
El Cazador y la Muerte Mientras todos están entretenidos en la suave armonía producida por el sonido y silencio y regida por la orquestra ruidosa de la floresta, el cazador, enredado por el silencio, observa los rastros que lo conducirán a la caza. Un buen cazador sabe de una cosa mucho importante. Conoce la rutina de su presa. El capibara sale de su toca y va al río beber agua toda la noche por el mismo camino. Comete los mismos actos, sorda y ciega delante de las innumeras posibilidades que...
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Version 2
6 Reviews   2 Comments
El invierno hace olvidar, apagar y desfigurar el vicejante verano, pero guardo los recuerdos del día del bautizo de Jaguarão. Soy como la nube de tempestad que guarda la memoria de los relámpagos, del amor y del terror, y actos de los héroes. Todo nombre indígena es como una historia. Los nombres verdaderos en nuestra lengua cuentan historias de los seres a quien pertenece. Solamente los chamanes y pajes pueden bautizar los curumins. Los festejos que cercaban el Kyriê, realizado a las márgene...
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Criticism / give it liberty!
Heavy words to say good point of view. Keep writing!
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / On My Way to Fame
I live in a place when crazy things happiness too! I really appreciate this piece. I like your choice about theme and your text has a nice flow. Well written and interesting! Good Job!
Poetry / Love
I like your structure and your poetry has a nice flow. Keep writing!
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Journey Of A Man Living With HIV
I appreciate your testimony, is possible feel pain, hope, power in your words. I have some friends with HIV and I know we can help them, but if they don't wish our help, nothing to do. I'm learning English Language, I can not read or write about your grammar mistake, but I love your theme, its actual and important remember about this sick growing in all the world. Really nice and important piece! Keep writing!
Short Story / Caburé
I like your tale a lot, but is possible found some mistakes about translation. Some moments your story sounds strange, but has a really nice idea and finish! I love this moment: "The precious essences are kept in closed containers so that they are not volatilized. In addition, it will not be difficult Caburé if to adapt to the new life, since it has the bird soul. The good people do not die, are magic." Beautiful words! Keep writing!
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