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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 03
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 03
Name: Christopher Howard
Age: 16
Country: England
Hi all! I love to write stories, and have writen quite a few, some of which are on here. Although I wrote some stories before it, I call “Gone to Heaven” my debut story. This is because I specifically planned it, and spent ages writing it. It also qualifies as my longest story, with about twenty four pages of A4 (size 10 font i think) when I printed it. A waste of paper, but I don’t mind. It’s about twice as long as my second longest story, though I don’t know what the second longest is.
I also tend to focus my writing upon romantic tales, mainly based around teenagers too.
My next story (which I haven’t planned much yet) will hopefully be a more magical, adventure style of story, ...
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The sound of a train’s whistle brought David back to his senses. He ran a hand through his short strawberry-blonde hair, before looking around the room. He was in a small room, which was poorly lit. He was in charge of the lost-and-found office of a small countryside railway station, which ran old steam engines rather than modern electric or diesel variants. He checked the time on his watch, and sighed. Nine thirty seven, PM, Friday evening. The train was early in its departure, but that was ...
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"From a small point bursteth forth a bigeth univerth..."
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The two teams then got onto the pitch as the other match ended. The two teams shook hands, and Emma quickly introduced the players to each other. Lisa did look determined to win. The others gave Emma a warm welcome as they saw her though, because friendship is more important than football. The match started. The Titan Tigers had kick off, which was taken quickly. Jake had just enough time to see that Grace was in goal, Lisa and Sarah were attacking, and Heather and Angela were… well, he suppo...
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Jake and Emma got up, and walked over to the side of the stage. Out of sight, they were told to dress up in foreign clothes, and were told the country. Then they walked on stage. “Ve vant to see Jezus lifted high,” They sang. “Like a banner flying through ze zky. Ve vill see him high un lifted up, flying in ze light of hiz glorvee!” “Yeah!” Shouted the leader, who then went to find someone who knew where they were from. “Bulgaria!” “Russia!” “Transylvannia!” “What’s the answer?” The leader sh...
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Prologue Spring Harvest was a Christian organisation that held annual meetings in Butlins sites across England and France. Though it did tend to attract a lot more than what you would call average for a meeting. If the entire fan club of Will Young, or Cheltenham Town football team, or Star Trek met in a room, it would be a meeting. If the Liberal Democrats held their annual members and members’ families group, it would be a meeting. If everyone who knew why Westlife were so popular were in a...
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Name! "He" needs a name! Otherwise you can't connect with him as easily as you might do. Only give someone a name if they aren't at all important, or if you're creating suspence, or if they are about to die! Otherwise, a good portrayal of an average day. Just wondering if you will take it further?
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Wow... That is a good story. I don't know if it is at all based on your or a friend's experiences, but it does seem really realistic. And the section about the body knowing when to fight to remain alive is really good, because although you can fit that into other stories too, it fits really well here. I hope the rest of the story goes just as well!
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Wow, that's a sad story... I guess the critisisms come in the form of punctuation and paragraphs. The paragraphs are too long, or so I feel, so it is hard to follow. And the punctuation isn't the best, because some of the sentences need shortening with commas and so on. But in terms of the story, it's good. I'm not too sure about the sstart of it, I've been told a couple of times that writing as the author doesn't work. But I think it works here. It would be good to read more of the stories, ...
okay... that is a really weird story, but mainly because it's got students talking in upper-class voices. It does work though, you'd never expect that to happen. The small speech about whether or not Bineaman has the code for Day or not is really clever, that is a real highlight of the story.
nice story. the very last line, "lucky number four" left me with a smile on his face. i really hadn't expected such a twist in the story. it would be really good to see if you could take this further, but it stands up alone very well. like you mentioned, the title is a bit... pointless. maybe look for a different title, something like... "Jags, Liquid Nails, and Shades." just dont let it ruin the twist at the end, because that works really well. what did get me though was the... the setting i...
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