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This poem is obviously deeply symbolic, yet I am having trouble understanding the intended message. I thought that the title could offer a clue, but the poem turns out to be more about identifying the compulsion itself without providing any underlying emotional details. This poem is strangely clear (e.g. detailed imagery) yet vague at the same time, and leaves the reader feeling that something is missing. Perhaps you could edit this to make the intended emotional effect more clear for the rea...

What an interesting parable-like story. I certainly don't see stories like this one often. You should edit this story closely for grammar and punctuation; I noticed many errors. The sentence "After that the trucker followed the daily progress of the spider and its web with great interest" seems unnecessary because at that point in the story, you have already made it clear that the trucker is interested in the spider's daily activities. The situation posed in this story seems realistic due to ...

To be perfectly honest, I have to say that this story is quite cliche. You also have a number of grammatical errors such as sentence fragments and dangling modifiers, as well as typos. The narrative is also inconsistent. Sometimes the story is told from a first person point of view, and sometimes it is told from a third person point of view (for example, the sentence that begins "It was a scene right out of a tragic movie"). Then we find out at the end that this is actually a letter that the ...