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Really nice and beautiful tale! I really love this piece. Is it your second tale? You need translate more tales to us enjoy! Like a Sanumá tale we can fell Love, Death, Philosophy... o lot things inside a same history! I love this image: "Caburé translated its love all the Mainá in its song. While it emitted its last sighs, it directed its last look friend for the trees. It did not have more envy of the buzzers: Caburé also went to sing until dying." Keep writing!

I like this piece. It's has a nice flow. I appreciate a structure and it's possible fell truth in your words. I can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language. Keep writing! Aloha!

Nice poetry, is possible feel a truth between words. I appreciate when your words make a good sounds like:"and what will you stake how much to forsake, will you make my same mistake or a different look will you take, " Great! Keep writing!

Well written ! good images when we open old memories...I love when you write this: "Gone, gone, gone, gone. Now only in the memories of the oldsters and in the books that no one reads anymore." I think about myself... Good job, keep writing!