Corruptedstatic's profile
AGE:
22
LOC: SF, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 05
LOC: SF, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 05
Have a passion for writing, seeing where it can take me. Looking for advice, reviews, and wisdom. :)
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Version 2
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Make a day, awake a night. Share a passion, bring forth the light. Climb a mountain, roll a hill. Reach for air, breath and feel. Walk the earth, swim the sea. Fly away, over dreams. A lover's imprint, a swaying tree. The taste of romance, kindles ecstasy. A shooting star, upon the sky. A photograph of captured time. The span of life, a stippled technique. This gift it gives, is the masterpiece
Version 2
3 Reviews
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Verse 1: We're lost, cold and alone our hearts only beat for one. Surrounded by glass, I'm reaching for grass, to spread my arms wide out open free. 'Cause we take more than give and we rob cautiously from others that cannot defend. There hearts do not beat and ours has cheated them. (Chorus) And were losing our humanity, 'cause we're living with our minds. Where do hearts go? Where the dead go. And were feeling less for our crimes. (Verse 2) The dark, helps us relax, covers the tracks behind...
Version 3
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(Verse 1) Dear people, hi. There's something on my mind. It hurts to say that I'm leaving you out in the dark. You see I tried. I gave you all the time, to love and hold me tight. I waited for a hint of a smile. (Chorus) Maybe your love is blind, or maybe love's never satisfied. Maybe you love another, and did not want to choose a side. You keep moving further and I'm falling far behind. So I'm leaving you out in the dark. (Verse 2) I'm quite surprised, I thought through human eyes, we'd stay...
Version 1
9 Reviews
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You can't keep your grip on me you have to let me go. I know that were wrong, why can't I tell you so? My skin it shivers, you take off your clothes. My body's yours but not my soul. You'll never be the same. Heart's will break and heal again, but scars remain forever and ever. Learn from all the pain. Heartaches burn through flesh and skin, but love again will wash it all away. 7 days away, I call, you pick up the phone. I told you that I'm sorry, should not of let you go. I say I love you, ...
Version 1
8 Reviews
1 Comment
These dreames I have had always said, What I don’t want to let out. Feel safe these dark thoughts in my head, but I’m starting to freak out. I feel a treason, myself wants to get out. They told me to keep it inside, get out, get out. Can’t stop what my mind decides, get out, get out. My eyes look towards the door, get out, get out. Myself is in ruin, I only hope I can get out. My mouth isn’t moving, and the words want to get out. Fell into deep, got lost in the sound, of silence it speaks so ...
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How clever and witty. 3 cheers for you. Insightful, aware, and quite comical. Thank's for the thought. With respect.
Oh nice. This is well said. Your a person always moving foward and thinking ahead. That is what this tells me about the writer. No regrets, no time to look back at what should or could of happened. Great piece. Thanks for the read. Good luck. With respect. -Corruptedstatic.
How exiting to wake up to work done by you! I fancy it because when you don't remember something, then you try to relate to yourself as if someone else wrote it. I've only shared this experience a few times. I definetly see a connection with what was written. What I mean by that is, though you were medicated, you still made sense with your words and feelings. I'm sorry for your pain, but I'm glad for your existence. This is an interesting piece. Though I cannot relate, I find it interesting h...
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Bravo. I'm a firm believer for others to look beyond god. What I find beyond god is...well, everything. Myself. Beautiful. Enough said in 6 words. I'm wondering how did you become aware of this realization? I wish others were shared the same perspective. Bravo again. :) Good luck with the contest. With Respect. -Corruptedstatic.
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