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AGE:
15
LOC: Woodstock, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 02
LOC: Woodstock, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 02
Alrighty then. . . a description of myself. Um, my name is Courtney and I am a high school freshman. YAAAY freshman! The least respected level of high school! Anyway if you care enough to read this then obviously you are expecting me to write about myself. So here goes.
I live in Atlanta Georgia, I love art. Especially drawing, but I paint and sculpt too. I recently had my art featured in an art exhibition, and I was the youngest artist there. Everyone else was old. Okay so, I love animals and I’m like a total tree hugger. I have cried because I saw people cutting down mass numbers of trees. Seriously. uh. . . my favorite color is green, my favorite food is California Rolls, and I have a dog named Rosco.
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There once lived a man I knew named Bob. He often enjoyed licking doorknobs. But this got him so sick. At midnight the clock ticked. And his heart beat its very last throb.
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This is a really nice poem. The ryhme for it works, and it flows. This poem is not difficult to understand, which is good because sometimes people can write poems that are so complicated and deep that no one can understand them at all. You did as really good job, however the title is a little misleading. This particular poem does not seem emotionless at all.
Alright . . . this poem left me freaked out. Utterly and completely. Seriously, where do you come up with this stuff? Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death. Each and everyone of em' It scared me. ESPECIALLY the one about this lady who baptized her baby with boiling water. Ew . . . That was awful! I swear man. But. . . the limericks. . . no matter how disturbing, were all written very well. Um, great job on that. So. . . . yeah, have fun with those twisted thoughts. Ugh. . . I'...
You know I usually do not read stuff like this, you know, because it's really long, but this totally sucked me in. I loved it. Like seriously, I almost cried. It's true. Like, because it's really sad in some parts, but so freakin' realistic. I can really relate to the main charecter, like all the emotions described, it was like as I read it, I was feeling what the main charecter was feeling. (Though perhaps not as strongly) I do wish you had described Dawn a little more, like her physical at...
I have to admit I enjoyed reading this poem. It was very relaxing. It also made a lot more sense then the other poetry I have read on urbis. I think You have a great chance of getting this published. I especially liked the part of the poem where the character in the poem tasted the shell. I totally didn't expect that, and maybe I am just one of those weird people who likes to read things in poems that surprise me, but it still was the highlight of the poem. At least for me it was. Maybe it's...
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