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awesome quote. i've never been able to verbalize that situation as eloquently as u have. but God knows i've been there. keep telling it like it is.

so true. a bit wordy though. i would've worded it as "...seem, just never as good as you wished." or "hoped" or "planned". things hardly ever meet the standards you hold them to. they hardly ever live up to your idea of them. this true about life really. good job. great quote.

pretty funny. is "needs work" a double entendre? like as in "needs fixing up" but also "needs a job"? if so, thats pretty clever. good job. your chances are good. i look forward to reading more from you.

nice! inspiring memoir. sounds like an awesome motto/slogan. does it have a title? your chances are good. i look forward to reading more from you.

i'm sorry. i've seen too many entries about the same idea. and this isnt nearly as creative. i'm sorry. i'm just trying to be honest/constructive. be more specific about your dream and what changed, i guess. i think that would make it stand out more. best of luck.