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LOC: Atlanta, GA
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LAST LOGIN: October 13
LOC: Atlanta, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 13
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***VERSE*** Caress my whisky mistress. Im married to a cigarette. To change my tone. To save my soul. I take it cold. I lose my faith. I cant compain. Remain the same. This paper bag. It holds my dreams. This paper bag. It holds me close. ***CHORUS*** *Please take me* farther than I want to go. Its whats inside you. That reminds me. Not to lose control. *So loose* take me farther than I want to go. Bend my mind. And take my time. ***TEETH SHATTERING SOLOS*** ***VERSE*** Too many colors to cho...
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*VERSE* You came - You cried - You walked away. A seedy prison - garden of eden. Prince of peacing this puzzled religion. Always - I am all but forgiven. Long songs strung along for impatience. My voice drowns slow in your vision. Always - I am all but forgiven. Ropes burn when your tied to the past. Come beg my choice returns!!! No money to kill for my freedom!!! Sunsets pardon all my conviciton!!! Always - I am all but forgiven. Yes god - I refuse your sleep!!! Continue - damaged potential!...
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Escalators, elevators, cars, motercycles, trains, buses, and moving fucking sidewalks are the reason people are obese. Excessive comfort and convenice breed weakness, I can not stress it enough. The national health administration will tell you "Take the stairs!." People have to save themselves right? It is against the law to attempt suicide, but you can eat, drink, and smoke your heart out because someone is getting a paycheck. How is it moral to conveniently save someone from themselves. We ...
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No. I do not understand why the runner wins in a tie to first. Kinetic energy is bold, but is it not the thought that counts. Does the first basemen not have to receive and return said hit ball to its instigator. What routes and pathways this game item travels are irrelevant upon the ultimate conclusion. You lose. Despite your efforts, your teams efforts, and equivalent skill level . First base is no mans land. The first foot, inch, second, ideal. Is there no admission of success. Why can thi...
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Yes the breeze was sultry. Lightly... It did not so much caress you skin, then move the air your in. Muddy words and emotion. Simmering... Smiles stretch horizontal- Hot air and hot water. Fresh sweat, just ready wet. Moist... Inviting geology, temptingly seducing you- "Follow Me!" The sun through the trees. Pokes fun... An annoying friend you tolerate, who's childlike habits are hard to break. A need for primal comfort. Lazy... Backs and bones, can make a hole a home. Even hot with the light...
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I love poetry with abstract to personal structure. Rhyme and reason can easily equal thought and feeling. Brutal reality and love. Life and death. The poem was fluid, and while dark, quite enjoyable.\ Creep
Morality, bandwagon emotions, segregation, and REVOLUTION! This story has hella potential, I like the parable of it all. The dialouge is a little weak to me, honestly I sense a little underlying redundancy in your word usage. "The kid from #38" almost gives it a sci-fi feel. I was expecting something entirely different. I also require more scenery and description. I walked in a room and found a suicide kid, a slasher. I want you to set the scene with contrastic colors against the blood. The t...
I'm back and you are in full effect. I wish urbis would let me pick your work to review but I am being robbed. |Grim, his Office... and the Ship| The environment that surrounds your charcters does so much to speak for thier color. Vivid and provoking sensation, I am able to form my own caution and or attraction through each scene. The interaction with surrounding objects allows me to file paperwork and to set sail. "I marched past her with my last soul. He was a punk in his twenties who had o...
"Disobeys" is either choking this piece or trying desperately to shine. Every word has one syllable and for placement holds power. "Disobeys" threw me to the wolves. The simple repetition of screams was somewhat captivating. The conclusive rhyme of "Hides" - - "Cries" - "Dies" drumrolled heavily. Simplicity should still hold soul. Creep
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