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AGE: 26
LOC: Chatsworth, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 10

I am 26 and have been writing for about 6 years now. I do not claim to be excellent and I am always open to critque- constructive critism is always welcome as I see as a motivational tool.

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Short Story / The Dreaming
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They say in the beginning that man and woman were as one creature. A creature with two heads, four arms and four legs; in attempts to steal the knowledge of the heavens they were subsequently separated and placed at the opposite ends of the earth for ever to be doomed to search for their other half…… Candance lay restless in her bed, her sheets and comforter twisted. She flipped over hard on her right side and stared at the red numbers on the alarm clock, 3:45 a.m. Frustrated s...
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Short Story / The Dreaming
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They say in the beginning that man and woman were as one creature. A creature with two heads, four arms and four legs; in attempts to steal the knowledge of the heavens they were subsequently separated and placed at the opposite ends of the earth for ever to be doomed to search for their other half…… Candance lay restless in her bed, her sheets and comforter twisted. She flipped over hard on her right side and stared at the red numbers on the alarm clock through the strains of ...
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Short Story / The Dreaming
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They say in the beginning that man and woman were as one creature. A creature with two heads, four arms and four legs; in attempts to steal the knowledge of the heavens they were subsequently separated and placed at the opposite ends of the earth for ever to be doomed to search for their other half…… Candance lay restless in her bed, her sheets and comforter twisted. She flipped over hard on her right side and stared at the red numbers on the alarm clock, 3:45 a.m. Frustrated s...
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Short Story / A Love story
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A small three by five piece of paper fluttered violently as the dirt filled breezes whipped around the blue jeep. Kylie stepped out from Gentry’s General Store, the wind twirling her strawberry blond hair. Her heart skipped a beat as she noticed the note flapping in the breeze. She quickly scanned the horizon then left to right, the only cars there were her own, the cashier Bonnie and the owner’s car. With a deep breath she walked over to the Jeep and plucked it from its confineme...
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Screenplay / Love Story Ver 2
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EXT. MARKET PLACE MID-DAY KYLIE IS AVERAGE HEIGHT, AND SLENDER BUILD. RADIANT STRAWBERRY BLONDER HAIR WITH DARK ROOTS EYES ARE BROWN. VINCENT IS AROUND 5'10", DARK HAIR AND GRAY EYES. ROB IS AVERAGE HEIGHT BLONDE HAIR AND BLUE EYES. ANDREW HAS BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. KYLIE CADE HAS RECENTLY MOVED WITH BOY FRIEND ROB SMITH FROM OREGON'S COAST TRYING TO MAKE A NEW START.   Kylie is walking out of a shop and finds a note on her car. She is carrying two bags. She sits them on the ho...
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Poetry / Everytrain
This is a very interesting piece. I really enjoy reading the sound play portions and the verse that is most memorable for me is I present a pocket-weathered ticket, but the conductor gives it back. “We always jump the track.”
Poetry / Blood
I took from this piece the writer feels queer about the world being lived in. Where everything is fantastical and made up. About living beneath a facade created to hide the fact that the writer isn't like everyone thinks they should be.
Very emotional peice, very oppressed by the feeling of being alone.
This is a very emotional peice, and is written nicely.
Poetry / For Every Kiss
This piece is very relevant to almost every person living's life. It conjures up the thoughts of both pleasure and pain. Very well written.