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AGE: 29
LOC: Amesbury, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 25

I am a wife and mother who loves to write. I have been writing since I was 12 years old and it has become such a passion.

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Poetry / The Storm
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The dark sky kisses the the thick air Hot and sticky my body is moist with sweat The thunder rolls in the distance The rain starts slowly at first Then in one split second flooding rain Drenched to my core I shiver The fear of lightning in my heart A crack and a strike The bright blue light of the lightning Strikes the ground infront of me I ramble short prayers As I run quickly to shelter The beauty of the storm calms my fears And I feel safe once more.  
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Poetry / withered
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Love is hard Hate is easy Blackened wings withered Torn Bare skin covered softly Bruised heart gently beats Crested moon shines dimly Tears sting weary eyes Bird of prey feeds Flesh torn slow Beastly laughs echo Spiritless eyes watch Messages engraved in snow Crys for help "unheard" Head throbs Pain takes over.. Everything.  
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Poetry / Daisy Field
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Take me to a field of daisies, Brush my hair from my eyes. Kiss softly my freckled cheek,                                                                   &nbs...
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Poetry / Daisy Field
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Take me to a field of daisies Brush my hair from my eyes Kiss softly my freckled cheek As we watch a slow sunrise Smell the sweet aroma Of dew bathed flowers all around Feel the earth below our naked feet But never make a sound. Lay with me in that field of daisies Hold me tight don't let go Give me these few short moments No one else will have to know.                    -DLCW
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Poetry / Dark Nights
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In the dark of night Secretly I fall to your feet Weak, broken,full of uncertainty Submission beaming from within You kick my hands away I am not worthy of your greatness Of your love, your friendship No words are spoken Not a second look, cast my way I lay weeping upon the floor As the night becomes morning light And I must pretend I am strong.  
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Novel Treatments / Stone Soup Chapter 22
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Poetry / What are you?
The thought behind the poem was good and overall its good.But it reads choppy in parts like this one...Now you are driven out of spite. Self. One. Over all you are a talented writer keep writing and making a statemeny and getting better.
It is funny and follows the limerick rules I love this part here....Thailand has a town called Phuket. All broadcasters were trying to duck it. Over all good piece.
I love the topic the piece flows well. This is my favorite imagary of the piece. Take up your swords Slay this danger Facing a new horde He uses the darkness to quell the threat about to take your life The overall piece was great and well written.
Short Story / The Kitty Diaries
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