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AGE:
25
LOC: San Jose, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
LOC: San Jose, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
I’m not really going for publishing status, though I’ve always had the dream to write and take photos for National Geographic. I think more I use writing to run with concepts that strike me in an instant. It’s quite enjoyable!
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A voice. I had a voice once. It fluttered and graced, it commanded and informed, it intoxicated and enticed. But no. Now, as I open my jowls to call out, all that is heard is a whispery clattering of air tumbling past a cut out voice box. A terribly pitiful noise really. I grew up in an area of the country that crawls with evangelistic types; thumping their bibles as though creating a beat for your catholic guilt to mambo to. There was one sect of these evangelistic types that was more a brew...
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The scuffing sound at my feet told me i was finally at the unpolished section of my wearhouse. The light had faded quite a few doors back, where i spend most of my time and am most familiar with. I loved decorating that area back there, I cleaned all the rooms, hung new pictures up atleast once every 3 months or so, and just had a new lightbulb installed...one of those 4 year deals...in the room with the door marked "college". But recently i've been so curious about this dark wing of the plac...
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I liked the hidden story that lies beneath this one. At least to me it seems like there is an older woman that exists in a time of religious turmoil and perhaps even war - forcing her to fight, but still she wants to love and carress as her more natural disposition. Very nice! The only fumble I had was "But they'll touch, will always love enough" to me it seems you may have meant "But THEIR touch, will always love enough". Over all, really excellent! Thank you!
That was great! I think that kids wil really get a kick out of it. I enjoyed the different sounds t-rex made. Instead of just Rooar- i can picture a teacher reading that and being able to entertain the kids with so many different sounds. The story had a great moral and was on key with elementary age mentality. It was very enjoyable! The only thing I would watch out for is, were you intending to rhyme or not? It seemed there was a couple of places where rhyme was attempted, but it wasnt consis...
Sounds intriguing! I would love to read some more of it. It seems to be one of those endings that really leaves you guessing and curious...which can be pleasantly frustrating!
Wow, I really liked this! I enjoyed the cryptic, almost manic feel to it, as if the narrator/creator of the poem was perhaps a forensic investigator and had seen all these different types of deaths and was now a little crazy about them. It seems to me that it was obviously refering to deaths, perhaps of different types like a suicide or murder in bed, a car accident, and perhaps even a hanging. I think i felt most giddy when I discovered this line's meaning - where the blue oh so blue was in ...
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