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AGE:
16
LOC: Murfreesboro, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 23
LOC: Murfreesboro, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 23
I’ve been writing since I can remember. It was mostly short pathetic stories, and I had not really realized it was my passion until about seventh grade.
When I had entered grade six I found a fictional journal I had started to write about a girl named Phoebe Pallidino (Such a mature thing). It made me start to writing again, and the next year I started a story (at the time I didn’t know it would become three chapters long and still writing a year later), An Unknown Vampire(it’s not on here), I took it and continue to write, and I have several others that I primarily write in. I started writing poems not so long ago, and have continued to write them when ‘it’ comes to me. though in my opinion it’s harder to write a poem, ...
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My world was tarnishing. It was crashing and burning, dark and dreary. My world was nothing but me. I was bitter, depressed. I was fucked in the head and I was dying inside. Then someone came along. This someone was amazing. This someone made my world bright. My world was given meaning. This special someone made my heart beat after it hadn't beat for an eternity. This certain someone and I have been through a lot. This certain someone is the one I want spend the rest of my life with. This gir...
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I’m at a loss of words to articulate what I feel. Most people expect me to be ideal, to have the perfect things, and to respond. Yet, I’m at a loss. You yourself said that one day I’ll have it all, but the truth is, I’m tired of waiting. Yet I can’t tell you, because I’m at a loss. My loved ones are losing things they think is their own, but soon when I ask them ‘what went wrong’ I hope they too will be at a loss. The pain I see in other’s faces when they realize the small things they can’t h...
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I gazed at myself sorrowfully in the inherited, full-length mirror. My back was hurting from the cane, and my stomach was sore from laying on it during the brutal, everlasting beating. I turned harshly, and quickly undressed, sliding into my old bed, and tried to sleep. After an hour of trying to sleep, I stood and grabbed my hoodie. I wasn’t in the mood to change, and I slipped on some flip-flops. “I made hoodies cool,” I whispered to myself, opening my window. Yes, I was going to sneak out,...
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Depression is an ugly thing. It rips, tears and makes you feeling sick. It's an act of defiance. An act of hopelessness It's nothing you can stop if you're not conscience of it It's not something you can handle When you feel it, your heart tearing and your tears forming, you let out a sob of pain Go ahead, turn up the music louder, scream in agony, just loud enough When it's done, you clean up, act like it never happened, hide it from the others Go ahead. It is, after all, depression
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As I sit, I envision silence, darkness, and an odd perfection. The stillness I try to accomplish, but still unable. The pain I see, I try to block out. With darkness in mind I wait for the call, light never wins in a battle of good VS evil. The more they talk, the less I slumber. Iin a Hell that has no forgiveness. No love, no acceptance; it consumes. Consumes every light that was once in my being. The screams I cease by forgetting, and I make sure that all the light has gone before I come ou...
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Perfect, and true... sometimes people need to be reminded of this fact. And though so many times thought, 'bout time someone actually said it. Can't wait for the series
Hmm, interesing really. It's love, hate, a a choice of both parts. You're the main character so it brings the poem to life. I like it. Just one thing, after the comma, put the word ofter it with the part it should be, and try making this a couplet, see if that should help the overall effect.
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