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AGE:
20
LOC: El Paso, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
LOC: El Paso, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
16yrs old, junior in high school, good at math, I love to write poems, letters, books (though I never finish them), I like to write almost anything.. I am in drama, speech and debate, and also in fencing.
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Scared, my plams are sweaty, can't breath, thoughts runnning through my head, heart beating fast. What will you say? How will you react? Will you even care? Do you even care about me? Will you just shrug your shoulders? Walk away? Scared, People don't talk to me, What I am is sick, I'm like a walking disease, No one likes me, except undertsanding people Will you hate me? Still be friends? Go off and forget about me? Hurt me? Scared, that when I tell you, that I might me Bisexual. That'll you ...
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I like the imagery in this poem. I like the colors that you did use in the poem. One thing is in the sentence "She clutches her cross and beginning to pray", to me, if it said and begins to pray, it would sounds better when someone is reading it. Otherwise I liked this poem.
I like that you didn't use simple and plain vocabulary, and since you did that it made the poem more elegant in a way. I also liked the imagery because you can see what each sentence in the poem is desrcibing. Also I liked that it is a short poem, it went straight to the point, and it didn't drag out or anything. Can't wait to read more poems from you.
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