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LOC: Waynesburg, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 05
LOC: Waynesburg, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 05
DarlingDeath
It’s better to burn out, than to fade away.
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Name: Corinne Frazer
Age: 15
DoB: May 13, 1991
Location: Pennsylvania
Interests: music, writing, reading, drawing, painting, calligraphy, scifi, art, psychology, philosophy, quantum physics, and ethics
Art: DeviantART
Influences: Edgar Allan Poe, R.A. Salvatore, Douglas Adams, Roald Dahl, James Patterson, Piers Anthony, Michael Chrichton, Anne Rice
Favourite Authors: Edgar Allan Poe, R.A. Salvatore, Steven Woodworth, Anne McCaffery,Eoin Colfer, J.K.Rowling and many others
Favourite Music: Rock, Metal, Hard…
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Nicknames and innuendos, secret words and silenced voices Quiet laughter in the dark The night air blankets them in their field of heather this secret escapade. Souls, intertwined, and the of taste eternity is soft as the wind, as it whispers and the will-o'-the-wisps dance about their bodies and never fade, these hopes are more real than any before, and like fireflies, they light the crisp air. Flesh against flesh, The night creatures play their only song. Silent as the trees. Words, whispe...
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Why are ya livin' to die to die Today? I'm just wishin' to hope, to hope to wish to die today. And I can't say anything else, cause anything else would be unneeded Undaunted Unheeded Hound of hell, devour you whole, ripping, tearin', and stealin' your soul He who lets the blood ravage the day, He who bites dust and sleeps in the hay, Cut down the doors and break in the veins, You think its crazy, but you're not in pain. Time goes on and time goes in, time breaks necks, and it's spawning the ...
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“What of the creature, Lieutenant?” asked a man with dark hair. His voice was crackled, as though he’d smoked too many cigarettes in the last ten years. And indeed he had, Colonel Whitman had taken up cigarettes at 16, smoking a pack of Marlboro Reds every day to now, ten years later. “Sir, he’s displaying great intelligence, and seems to be a quick learner, there are guards posted at the entrance to his holding area, for fear of his learning to open the locks.” Lieutenant Sheldon was a small...
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Listen to the melody Of a thousand nations collide Burn into the symphony Of the great aside Wish into the masterpeice Of a broken hollow soul Fear into the facade Of none and all alike Cut away my cliches Drop the rhyming lines Break away from darkness And poetry define. Bite into the abyss Sink into the sea. Steal away my verse, Take away the me.
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I'm so sick I'm so tangled in an ethereal web spun by me, the black widow, Sometimes I wonder if you remember, the days not so long ago. Maybe the inebraition, maybe all the days, maybe all the verses have torn away what I now realize never was. Just another dream left to wander the night. Just another shadow to fade away with the sun. Just another soul to be cut apart by the trials of darkness. What is Little Darkness, but another shadow, a seeker, who speaks, and when words mean naught she ...
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It really is a great piece, and it flows delightfully. It has a nice sound to it, but it's overly complex. Your goal is to be published,and one thing I've learned, is a publisher is going to publish something that the general public can read and understand, and unless you've got quite a vocabulary (I will admit, some of the words stymied me), you're not going to understand something like this. I suggest toning down the complexity of the vocabulary.
Great work, very sad and very well written. For a chapter, though, I think this is a tad short. "..and didn’t have no one else to share my pain" Correctly that should be "... have anyone else to shar my paint", what you've written is a double negative, and suggest that the narrarator does in fact have someone with which to share her pain. Overall, great work, I'd love to see this continued. I'm hoping its about someone who triumphs over their stormy childhood.
Wow, thats.. very strange. It's neat though, I like the way it morphs from your inner thoughts to a dream. It would be nice to get more feel of the dream, more of the colors and sights and smells. I like your voice or style, or whatever you want to call it. I'd avoid using parenthesis as much as possible, though, and perhaps, when you have numbered lists, make them lists, put a linebreak between each number. And avoid using slashes, as much as you can. Very neat. Keep writing!
Oh my, this is brilliantly funny, and I bet it's happened to teenage boys. Great work, you've really captured the right persona, as your narrarator. I like it, and I'm not quite sure what else to say, other than this is terribly ammusing.
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