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AGE:
21
LOC: South Africa
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 07
LOC: South Africa
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 07
I’m quite young I guess. I’ve always had a brain that works differently to other and by differently I don’t mean better I just mean different. If my writing is bad then there’s no harm just a new perspective.
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I woke up and felt the same as every crappy time before that. I was not the man I was the night before. The countless hours of constantly being drug abused that substituted for sleep had stripped away all evidence I was human, all that was left was a harrowed mind muffled by an exterior void of all coherence. I began to notice this as I began to remember less and less of the night I had just experienced. The evenings were just dramatic flashes of behaviour not characteristic of my usual self....
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"You're a fucking idiot!" was my girlfriend's perhaps presumptuous response to the diversion in my sexual ally; I call it this because I believe that 'partner' is not the best term for these types of situations. You see partners sometimes disagree on what they want and believe but allies share a common goal; this is agreed upon before they even meet so there is no need or occassion for arguing, therefore I find the term appropriate. Anyway this isn't very relevant and I'm straying from the re...
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I don’t belong here. It may seem like I do to the untrained eye, I appear normal and content with what’s happening around me and people may even say “That Dash, he really belongs here.” I don’t. Beneath this placid mask boils a broth of seething resentment for the world today. It’s not that I hate the world. I just hate what it’s become. So now raises the question: Where do I belong then? But that question isn’t quite right. You see the question isn’t where but when. When do I belong is the d...
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I like the whole banter in the story. The only thing is that I have a bit of a hard time following it. Maybe i'm just slow but I can't even tell how many characters are in it. Maybe I should read the other parts. The satire is rather funny and it takes quite an extreme view on the those kind of circles in society today and I can see where you're going with it. I just think some may be lost in the translation what with all the references and all. But I think it's an interesting direction your ...
This is absolutely charming. I love those Southern USA novels, with all that small town magic. I only wish the story hadn't been so short, the protagonist is captivating. The colourful use of language you've incorporated makes it all the more funny. All in all definitely too short.
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