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AGE:
18
LOC: Wappapello, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 16
LOC: Wappapello, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 16
I am a 17 from Missouri, I’ve been writing poetry for going on ten years now, and I’ve been making hip-hop music for about eight, but I just recently heavily got involved in both…I’ve been making many records and writing dilegently…SO yeah, that’s pretty much it for what I do here…I have what is described as a down to earth writing style and I’m not really definiate to any box, I’m just me and I say what I feel how I feel like saying it…
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'Sometimes you just wish that you knew what they were thinking, you know; I mean for them just to open up and give you just a little hint as to what they're feeling inside...Like I like to talk about what they're into because I want to learn more about them, and I know deep down they wanna tell me, but they force me to talk about me, I guess cuz' they wanna do the same or that's what we hope right? I like having one sided conversations cuz' I love to listen to what they have to say, but they ...
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Be it as it may, life is so fragile Simple strings hold together the steel frame If a string snaps, a side will fall As the side falls, the other string will loosen And once the string loosens, what is left to hold As the opposite side crashes down What is life, but a pile of gold?
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When I write, it all comes out I talk about everything there is no limitations. The greats I love, like Poe and Frost ‘Death Be Not Proud’ also holds admiration. For me poetry is life in the written form It isn’t ink on paper it’s blood on soil. Their isn’t anything experienced that isn’t real Happiness, beauty, love, disgust, hate and toil. Expression through words is what I live for, I tell you how I feel and help you along with helping me. If it could be a career choice I’d choose it, rath...
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'This is how I goes, lovely and adored/ This is my story of to the girl I love more and more/ Come take a walk with me, I’ll explain all too real/ I got to apologize for the things I’m gonna reveal/ Runnin’ to deep to keep underneath concealed/ From you so here goes the top off the whole deal/ I feel that I fell in love with you/ And there’s not too much that I can do/ About the situation ‘damn’, that it’s true/ Found something perfect ‘ God damn’, I should’ve knew/ That it would become so fu...
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I try to figure out everything that I can about emotions so I know exactly what triggers them. It's because I wish I had the power to just shut them out completely, you see if I had that power I wouldn't be in the particular predicament I am in at this moment. Seeing that my situation is with me being in love with a girl whom is already taken; what a bitch is love, you can call that there personification. If I could just simply make up my mind not to care for her anymore, a big 'problem' in m...
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I like the story and I like your style, the subject matter and creativity in presenting it was incredible, it was cool...Very very nice. i liked it a lot, it was very different from anything i have ever read and i would love to read more of it when it comes out. its very well set up and the grammar is perfect. i’ve haven’t reviewed too many short storys before and this is just wonderful! keep doing what you are doing and good luck!!
Hmm...I think this was average and I didn't really like it, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I feel that this needs a bit of work in order to be truly acceptable, I'm very sorry in giving you this review, because I know you probably worked hard on it and I just want to say that I respect you for this peice, even though I am not a fan...You under stand?
I thought of this as a good piece overall not really in my area of so-called expertise but none the less, I found this to be nicely done and very entertaining. I like your writing style but I feel as though there is some left to be desired from this story. You could probably become a very good writer in the future so just keep doing what you are doing, much love...Peace and God Bless... D.W.H.
I believe I crtiqued the first chapter of the story, and I will say as I did with it, you did a great job in creating your world and developing your characters, maybe make the description just a little more vivid, because I felt that my own imagination was doing more work in some places rather than yours...But all in all I felt the peice was once again succesfull and being that your at such a young age...I think your skills will carry you far!
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