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AGE: 36
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 03
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Stake that faked fall from grace All will crumble, break then burn Sideways notions, gold then threw Stuck in her mouth so gone then blew What exactly else can I use you for? You talk of four letter words mean you Stinks of miracles self harmed creeps Hey a choice before we came the way Only lust will call before the fools pull Oh didn't you live behind a veil today? Pissing parades the urge happy ended Lost it in the face all that dripping blight Confused xerox shadow with real charm Cock st...
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In this world without walls an escape Kill relics belong don't bleed slighted Everything is over will be the rush Trap inside the sigil fiendish remains Spit roasted smile be as fallen tonight You never say what you never say luz Will not change in chains forever splay The light is failing yes to no more you No random routines claim flesh hunters Swine and dined with cheap red nothing Security no need to buckle up just die No ride for what a fucking bind never fly This pornstar frame begs red...
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Poetry / PUSSY BURNS
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Replaced with the never say no In and out of suits bears a scar Subtle persistence reap divides You aren't the thirst get behind Total control a chalice splitting Paid to hurt so join a 'no queue' Razors and wire empty games The gimps fell first now the last Skin dancing on brittle glassed A order that works bled desires The prey for flags always burns Nazis and pricks 1984BC again Smashed up in which city rules Pick the glass from shallow we A black sun for everyone come Their time is done c...
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Total construct of redesign for nothing Always giving cave in stitched on knees Recurring terminal bleed slave daydream God grant it something where to run Kinda feeling skinned deep what is real Look at the savage shapes on wall burn Primitive rituals break monkey with stick Want fur worn credit card love scorner True natures path makes us on eight legs Sweat and salt exchange scheme vows Living so so death forsaken a pause of reality They tell you who to be or did you choose you A funnel of...
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Everybody needs an enemy sometimes To lose that truth inside a shallow like you We all feel so know the storm is coming What will you hold when everything fails When apart is all tomorrow isn't a future There is still time for the shining to rise Maybe empires fall we do not my love No strength in tearing fools from thrones All that is written will pass given time Fell out of each star up in that sky You can't go back till you are found The sun will rise we are no shadows cast You defeat them...
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Poetry / DAM YOU
Very Human - I am connected to this.
Strong piece; can be interpreted on several levels which always appeals. It could also work well put to music perhaps in an alter-rock vein or possibly even industrial.
Poetry / Untitled #1
Not bad; I usually don't like romantic themed pieces as I find they are quite difficult to do well. However this piece has a certain charm and veers away from flowery prose and its point is nicely played. Never stop writing.
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I like the sense of abandonment in this piece - the loss of self in a bland world of uncaring drones and grey cityscapes. The ending is quite strong in the sense that it is not clear whether the protagonist is leaving the mortal plain or just the drabness that surrounds her. Anyone who favours good prose or lyrics knows something should be left to the readers own intelligence/imagination and I am grateful to the writer for acknowledging this. I also like the mention of Oscar Wilde who spent a...
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