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LOC: Louisville, CO
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LOC: Louisville, CO
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Death, Destruction, Mayhem and Chaos Feel the rise of the Dead Saint again he has risen from this place to take his rightful throne Host to the Maggots Murders and Graves Feel the pain in this place Can you feel the murder now? Hear the pain an eerie sound Feel this life coming down In this little darkened town Fear, Deceit, Hatred and Anger Take up your swords Slay this danger Facing a new horde He uses the darkness to quell the threat about to take your life Can you feel the danger now? Hea...
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Sitting in the dark letting hatred consume me I feel the laughter come to me thoughts of blood and bodies intensify the laughter tonight Can you hear my mad cackling? I plan assualts to harm you I plan your demise for fun ways of torture, yet I am numb Realization of Insanity's consumation of me make me laugh harder at the destruction of thee I am too numb to care anymore about your sad life I feel only when I take that life away So happy I feel when I see your blood flow...
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I stay away,Long nights spent alone She keeps me up with these thoughts of her My love for her consumes me,I get lost in this sensation I wish she was here(yet she is here) Can't escape from these thoughts of her Can't escape this love I can't escape her nor do I want to Her beauty haunts my dreams her voice rings in my ears I feel so distant,yet so close to this woman I love Can't escape these thoughts of her Can't escape this love I can't escape nor do I want to I'm imprisoned within these ...
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Nice job. One thing I noticed and I could be completely and totally wrong however isn't it supposed to be 72 virgins? Other than that I enjoyed this work and you brought up some great points. The media does have a tendency to step on anything. Also, America has become soft and what are we going to do so that we don't become even fatter on our ignorance and plain stupidity.
***1*** : Amazing flow and overall great job. The best line(s) in my opinion was "I wanted only to hold you, to feel warmth, Let me have this frail fantasy." Without that a large amount of the imagery would be gone because this line shows the intensity of the want. ***2*** : Again great job. I can not say anything that I have not said already. I hope to read more works like this. I gave you a nine on overall poetry.
This poem really speaks to me due to the current circumstances in my life. So my review may be a bit biased however, The piece flowed well through-out the entire work and it used great imagery. The personification of the emotions was the best part. Overall, great job
After having no knowledge of the previous chapters I can say just by reading this one chapter I wish to read back and continue. This could be expanded a little bit but overall very good.
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