Deanne's profile

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AGE: 54
LOC: Tampa, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 21

I grew up in the deep woods in northern Michigan and have lived in Los Angeles, Hermosa Beach, Torrence, Van Nuys, Boulder, Denver, Key West, Tampa, and now Spring Hill, Florida.
We began writing (for we were twins  in that cabin with deer for neighbors ) about 4th grade in eanest, authoring every play and skit our class put on . At home we made up Arrow Book Lists and lists of our library books when we returned from there, describing  or summarizing both real books and ones of our invention.  The twin got to read whichever interested her most. If it didn’t exist and she chose it, the reward was a good laugh  because we’d fooled a brilliant adversary. We were quite creative so we’d disguise a book like Bambi so the other would never …

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1. PROLOGUE: Dad’s Wife, Cuckoo One Saturday night when we were already in our pajamas, four children under eight years old, Mom said she was going out to the garage to kill herself and not to open the door or the fumes would get us, too. Nothing like this had ever happened to us before, and we were in shock. We could hear the engine roar occasionally. Once we opened the door a crack and the garage was filled with smoke and stink. We had no ideas regarding what to do. Then the garage door wen...
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Pockets of Change 1. Dad, Woods Owner One Saturday night when we were already in our pajamas, four children under eight years old, Mom said she was going out to the garage to kill herself and not to open the door or the fumes would get us, too. Nothing like this had ever happened to us before, and we were in shock. We could hear the engine roar occasionally. Once we opened the door a crack and the garage was filled with smoke and stink. We had no idea what to do. Then the garage door went up...
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It's sad for me to see a photo of Dad with sons 9 and 7 standing beside him, coming to the top of his swimming trunks. Little boys on a trip out west with their dad, so excited about buffalo and coyotes, canyons and Indians. That's when he should have been with them every single day--because soon enough, he was going to have to live another 24 and 37 years without them. Those should have been the years he took off during. But we never know, and neither of them would ever say their time with h...
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Once I sold newspaper subscriptions in the meanest Tampa Housing projects , unworried because my boss, Dan, was always able to keep me at ease, somehow-- I knew I was safe. I'd seen him respond to a coked-up black stranger waving a cocked and loaded gun at him with "Get that gun out of my face ; I can't talk with a gun in my face." The authority and mellowness all rolled into the voice were the perfect combo to make the guy sit down and shut up--usually really stupid; you never show a gun at...
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Novel Treatments / Pockets of Change, Part Nine
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Those disks we fly-fishing homes are so familiar with-- yellow, 3.8 pound test, Platyl leader material, 60 feet, made in West Germany; a baseball signed by every Detroit Tiger when they won the World Series in 1968--boy were we charged then! And this box I don't get at all: The first envelope, postmarked "Quincy, Mass." and "1937", has 56 drawings slathered in pink ink, all different people, one in bowler hat, one in glasses, one a female--and says "In honor of the 200th anniversary of the bi...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Idea of a Writer's Life
It sounds like a writer's life till you get out of the word-smith words and use words for any one's life ( fire-dancer, drum circle leader). Whatever happened to republication or plagarization?
well-written as far as meter, verse--perhaps a tad trite in content, but you do know how to write good meter. I like it but I have trouble guessing whose hat and keys--that person could not have left shirts, books, sweaters, so much stuff, could they? I would have to say that they are like, 1 day or less gone to have left so much around, and then you just got their fair-thee-well between the using of the fire and it's going out--this is a brand-new goodbye--usually people don't flood with mem...
Novel Treatments / Kimimela Chooses the New Wife
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It is possible, just as one could say "I am nature in worm-form before hatching ", but I'd think butterfly wings were nature, along with so much else, i.e., "I am nature, I am butterfly wings in my nature". A more robust expression might be I am the butterfly's wings". But I've never seen these 6-word momoirs--you meant memoirs?--you would not want to waste any words in such an encapsulating short phrase, and butterfly wings alone show you are nature and give you 2 more words to distinguish y...
Short Story / New York Minute
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