DirtyPablo711's profile

i’m an aspiring writer living in south eastern mass.  writing has always been a hobby and dream of mine, one that i pushed aside after high school and when i went into college.  after spending a short time trying to pursue a field that i had only a passing interest in, i turned back to my first love, writing.  i stumbled upon urbis and have fallen in love with it.  in the past the only feedback i’ve been able to get has been things like, “oh its great,” or “i love it.”  now i want some real opinions.  good or bad tell me what you think, but either way, tell me why you feel that way.  hearing that its great or that its terrible is of no use to me unless i know what makes it that way.  dont hold back, i’m not fragile.  i’ve lasted this lon…

i’m an aspiring writer living in south eastern mass.  writing has always been a hobby and dream of mine, one that i pushed aside after high school and when i went into college.  after spending a short time trying to pursue a field that i had only a passing interest in, i turned back to my first love, writing.  i stumbled upon urbis and have fallen in love with it.  in the past the only feedback i’ve been able to get has been things like, “oh its great,” or “i love it.”  now i want some real opinions.  good or bad tell me what you think, but either way, tell me why you feel that way.  hearing that its great or that its terrible is of no use to me unless i know what makes it that way.  dont hold back, i’m not fragile.  i’ve lasted this long, i’m determined.  

just a note to anyone reading my story, A Murder of One.  i’ve broken it up into chapters for no other reason than to give organization to each section.  in no way should it be taken that this is a final breakdown of the piece, and any suggestions on an order or combining sections would be appreciated.