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LOC: Campbell, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 11
LOC: Campbell, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 11
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SLAM! Face on the wall. BAM BAM! Broken nose. SMACK! Blood seeps from every pore. BASH! Fades to nothingness. Brian Taylor was walking home and knew it was one of his few “good” days. It was a good day, only because his father would not be there when he got home. He lived with his father now, his mother died 3 years ago, and the entire family was having difficulty coping with the loss. The two of them now lived alone in a poor neighborhood. They had been having trouble making ends meet lately...
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I enjoyed it, but it also confused me. I wasn't quite sure what certain parts meant. Ex: I can fool people’s belief of a man with a job is responsible. Next I would need company and practice the arts. I hope thats not myself being ignorant... but i think a little more detail would be a very helpful in a lot of parts... i enjoyed it overall though, keep it up
i like this. I think its funny, because anyone that has a myspace says the same thing when they find out how much time they have wasted on it.
this really did confuse me. I liked it... as i do with all poetry really, but is there a deeper meaning here, because i wasn't able to find it. It seemed like a bland statement about birds. The only thing i could pull out of it was that you were comparing them to humans possibly
well i am not sure if i quite understand the true meaning of this, but if i did, i like the point that you are making My interpretation was that you are commenting on the fake reality of the internet in general, and i really like that
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