It is a good poem and has the potential for a great children's book. Smile, Doris

Add more details to dress it up or make it more attracting. It has very good format. Smile, Doris

That was very good, but there are a few small spelling mistakes. Remember that while speaking from the heart one can never go wrong. Smile, Doris

Perfect teen point of view. Smile, Doris

A very true feeling and question all we religious people ask ourselves from time to time. You may want to change a few of those "Do you believe in God" to another form of question, but yet the same.Thank you for letting me read this. Smile, Doris

No fun or silly, but of deep love that was only realized after one leaves.Sorrow is an emotion that can not be covered,but time will heal. This was very good and deep. Thank you for sharing it, Doris

Fairly stated, but nothing that hasn't been already said. Smile, Doris