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AGE:
39
LOC: Cincinnati, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 03
LOC: Cincinnati, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 03
Greetings! I am new to sharing my writing with the public and interested in seeing what total strangers think!
Personally i am a husband, father, football coach and voluteer. I drive a taxi, which is where some of what i write will come from, crazy! The rest just comes as i think of it.I love music, it has to be wherever i am! Sports is a close second! I love movies and reading non-fiction books.
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I am who i am because he was who he was Never much fanfare, it was just because Because he took the time to make me He also took the time to raise me It wasn't always easy but he did his job Made sure i never had to steal or rob I had everything that i needed And i got what i needed when i would need it That wasn't when i always wanted I couldn't always have what i wanted But what i got i'm thankful for it When manhoods taught you can't ignore it And all of it your not gonna like But you cool...
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Gas just hit $4 and i drive to make my cash So i'm feeling the pinch in my right and left pocket and wonder how long this all will last When i started driving a taxi gas was .89, so $4 is making me gasp I'm up to $45 a day and gas seems different, it's burning off too fast And everything else is going up so my dollars just don't go as far I'm thinking about getting a shiney scooter, complete with a two seater sidecar I gotta do something quick and people will understand The price of gas is ki...
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Not bad and something i think we all can relate to! The still and calm of the night is a wonderful thing that you have captured in words! The "infinite depth of dark" explains the wee hours very well
wasn't sure if you were describing the pleasure of a hot bath or the pleasure of sex in a hot bath or if you started with one then went to the other or what happened. you have the skill of word play but i was lost in your playing. keep the ideas constructed towards your thoughts. and i'm never to big to say maybe it's me!
I like this! It speaks to the moments when we don't want to think about anything for the rest of the day! You could have easily put strong person instead of woman and it still would've had the same power! "Tell me what to do, just so i don't have to choose" i think says it all and raps it all up in one sentence. Good job, keep it up!
Sounds like someone really touched you in a special way. " A hero amoung heroes" is a strong statement. You captured your feelings and conveyed how strong they are very well.
Gripping. If for no other reason the amount of people i know stuck in that position. You were able to explain her misery and why she needed out quite well. The ending made you hope that she was one hell of a swimmer! Definitely holds a persons interest!
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