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AGE: 49
LOC: Mason City, IA
GEN: Female
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Hi, My name is Puckie Duddles And when I walk I wiggle, wiggle, waddle. I Love to play out in the rain And … Splash Splash Splash In Puddles! Puckie Duddles lives in the country, and her address is Jacob’s farm. She lives there, with her mother and father. Many different animals live at Jacob’s Farm, and Farmer Jacob Takes care of all of them. He brings their food each morning and night and makes their homes nice and neat for them. Jacob is a good farmer. The sun peeks in to wake Puckie with...
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It started out that evening with a visit from a dear friend who brought Lasagna and garlic toast for supper. Tom didn’t stay long afterwards but Samantha and I were fed and it was always good to share in Tom’s company even though he rarely stayed more than a half an hour. Samantha liked Tom and she held his attention over the course of the meal with question after question and Tom delighted in the joy of it all and gave back to her as much as she dished out. Tom’s visit was truly a delightful...
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When thou past by me, and I did see O lovely is thy gander Whence thou cast thine eyes on me Mine heart you stole in grandeur Truly love would have imprisoned me If my name thou did rehearse. Your beauty fairs far lovelier Than any thing on earth Each step you make, takes the grace Of winged Angels rapture. O My Love, I beg of thee: Is this my only destiny? The torment of your gaze on me Is this loves finest hour?
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Brilliant autumn colors, Splash the background, Of rolling hills and bluffs. Crimson red and harvest gold, Everywhere you look. You smile, as you look at me, And place your hand in mine. Together, we stroll leisurely, Taking our sweet time. Down the beaten path, Trodden long ago, Endures to present time, And shows the way to go. Leaves drift gently, Down, down, down, Falling all around us, Blanketing the ground. Looking past the Pines, Down below the cliff, Barges… make there way, Up the migh...
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Poetry / Undeniable
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Love strolled in… And stole my heart Gave unto me… This brand new start Two hearts divided… Now beat as one A love was born… New life begun Undeniable… Is my love for you Your kisses sweet… Like morning dew Tossed dark hair… And hazel eyes Your boyish grin… Was my demise Our journey… A challenge Through forest thicket But oh the treasures… Held with in it! Time with you… Like stolen hours Precious and few… But full of flowers Our time will come… To soar like eagles Free at last… To love you R...
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This story leaves me feeling a little bit like I did while watching or attempting to watch Pulp Fiction. Your thoughts and ideas flip flop back and forth making it difficult to stay with the program, although after reading it and re-reading it, it slowly sinks in and you are either a very brilliant writer or to quote your own words” a lousy author”. In my understanding of the story “He” is writing about his last moments before being shot and his last thoughts before dying. Although even this ...
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Short Story / Stolen
This story is well written and easy to take in. Your use of metaphors and scene descriptions makes it easy for the reader to be there watching. I like the way you start the story off and then go back to bring the reader up to speed. The relationship between the characters is a real life relationship and one in which we all wish we had with someone. There are a couple of grammar errors but those can be taken care of through editing. I feel you have a good story base here and that you should ex...
Children's / T-Rex
While raising my 8 year old granddaughter I have read many books with her, many of which were not this well written. Your story is easy to follow along and provides plenty of imagination as well as a valuable and age appropriate lesson in life. No one likes a bully. Your story demonstrates this and the follow up of the character realizing this for him self, will put the thoughts of the lesson in the minds of the many young readers who find themselves in T-Rex’s shoes. My only suggestion for r...
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