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I thought this was an actual war scene until the end. Invokes realistic emotions under fire. I like the mention of "drugs" in this story. Good story.

When I started reading this, it invoked images of Nazi Germany, with mass graves. I understand the filfth of war. Iraq has a problem with stench and flies. The flies can drive you mad, as they seem to do the characters. Field hygiene is a luxury in war. "Sterilization" is misspelled. Very good story. I love the story, even the seemingly absurdity of focusing on, and gaining comfort from the spiders. Very unique story.

The last stanza is really good, especially "mouths are mute."