DragonQueen's profile
AGE:
18
LOC: Colorado Springs, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 01
LOC: Colorado Springs, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 01
I have been writing stories for as long as I can remember. My newest story, Antonia is my first real novel. It is the first in two series that i have planned for her. when Reviewing please give any advice, i want to know what you think.
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“In times of darkness, the world’s eyes are blinded. All they see is the darkness, wishing it to disappear and never return. What they don’t realize is that you can only see true beauty and light through darkness. If you don’t know darkness, how can you know light? How can you see with blind eyes?” Antonia Van’Dragon Evil, an unbearable force, consumes those who seek its power, takes the hope from those who let it rule them. There are few however, who liv...
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During everyone’s lifetime there is always that one face you will never forget; that one face that haunts you day and night. I have many but one of those faces is Saran Van’Bratta, the first person to betray my people. She was the one who convinced the others to do nothing as the Athean race was becoming extinct. She was one that I never wanted to see again but… destiny wasn’t kind. It turns out that my beloved Anton,...
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??**Four Years Later...**?? In the Fields of Blood, two statue memorials standing tall, glistened in the mid-day sun as a young woman stood, blue-purple eyes gazing up at their stone faces. The first was a woman rider, sword held high in triumph, hair sculpted as if blowing in the wind. Behind her stood a dragon, wings spread wide. On the two layer round pedestal, words were carved on a sheet of gold saying ‘To the selfless Riders and Dragons who bravely gave their lives for Athea; You will b...
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Antonia's blonde hair, glistening like the morning sun, circled in the air, mimicking her body's movement as it twisted her staff sweeping through the air toward her opponent Joneen Farshal. Joneen arched her back, knees bending, so Antonia's staff swept over her red shirt, barely avoiding a finishing blow. In response, Antonia swung her staff once again at Joneen who instantly brought up her staff to block it. Antonia, her exquisite blue eyes full of concentration rabidly swung her staff at...
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If I was an Irsih potato person, I'd try to find a potato to see what I tastes like, When I was done, If I liked it, I would eat myslef, Then I'd be extinct.
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Brilliant blues knifed the sky, tipped with a hint of orange. In the distance, to his right, behind the corn and wheat fields, dead trees littered the base of hills rolling by, slowly. I like the way this is worded This is, like teh others, well done in my eyes. This is a good piece of work and i will gladly read more. Well Done!!! It is believeable and The characters feel real and are easily liked or disliked. Once again good job.
This was god, as always. I have started to read your wrok with high expectations and I have not yet been let down. It was well wroded and descriptive, as well as intresting. There is was never a dull moment. Good work once again, I would try and be more detailed or helpfull but alas it is late and i am tired. Good job!
Once again great work. YOu fully had me pulled into teh story as if watchign a movie. Below i have a few examples this timei managesd to pullout. “Borell, if I ever catch you saying one bad thing about Delah. No. If I catch you even looking in her direction, I'll use some of that good priestly training I learned. You know that fancy kick and fist move you guys love so much. I even got some good elbow moves, too.” this is when the audience cheers and soem looseres say burned. well done. Before...
once again great piece of work, no flaws. IT drew me in and kept me intrested, it is like a page turing novel you can't put down. good job on this.
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