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AGE: 28
LOC: Riverside, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 15

How can such a small space be so unforgiving? I never been good at describing myself in simple terms, because I feel it doesn’t do my complex personality justice. There are a life time of stories written in between these lines.  I would give you my two cents, of the things I been though, but it would be more like a change roll. I invite you to come explore my world and play in the playground of my imagination. But realize as you glance at these blueprints of me, that you are viewing the imprints of my mind, and pieces of my soul.
All of my writings are dated at the bottom to show the time in which they were created.

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Novel Treatments / Am I Ready To Publish My Fiction
by JayG
This imparted much wisdom by helping me access some much needed advice and well source information. In my opinion, you gave struggling or new writers much needed direction by bringing them back to the basics and fundamentals. Even though, you packed it full of advice and knowledge, this short story didn't come across with the calluses approach of trying to tell the reader what to do. You've made it personal by sharing your struggles as a writer, but keep an optimistic tone with your insightfu...
Poetry / Cake
by Anonymous
Are you this sarcastic and sharp witted in person? If so I never want to get in argument with you:p I don't mean that as insult, but a compliment. This poem has a very intelligent concept, and a certain witty coyness to it, but I think because of these reasons not everybody is going to get it or appreciate the humor of this piece. I adore the last line "You are going to need milk to wash me down.", very punchy, like an explosion of TNT. I interpreted the capitalization of some words, being wo...
Poetry / Pyres of Youth - revision 3
by TheStormofWar
This poem was a little difficult to read. Before that sounds insulting, I actually for once mean that in a good way. Each of your words along with their placement and diction carries a weight. It makes you read slowly, and take it in one word at a time. It completes the mood of this piece. The only thing that threw me off was the first line "The air-raid alarm fragments ", as it immediately put visions of war planes in my head. This cause me to back track some with the first verse to accurate...
Young Adult / Secrets
by TokenMassacre
Very touching story. The girl in the story seem tangible because although her dialog has the maturity of somebody that has to deal with a disability, you didn't over exaggerate the language in a way in which it wouldn't suit her age. As I read " Secrets", it did take some time for the story to climax. The beginning was a little slow for my personal taste, and this wouldn't have been a major issue for me if later on there was more of a conflict. Certain aspects of the story where a little too ...
Poetry / Nightmare
by Anonymous
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