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LAST LOGIN: June 08
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There’s not much to say about me other than I’m a fanciful little kid at heart and I can’t stop writing.
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Rule Number 5: Don’t look in your partner’s eyes Rachel glared into Damien’s eyes as they rehearsed. They moved fervently over the dance floor and Rachel grated out the words to the song. Damien laughed as she tripped in between steps. “Damn it!” she snarled. “Breathe.” Damien told her. “Relax, girl, we’ll get it.” Rachel nodded in agreement and led him to position to start over. They were rehearsing for the Talent Expo at their scho...
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Adele’s life was perfect. She had a perfect house filled with everything she had ever wanted. She had the perfect parents who loved her very much. She attended the perfect school where she maintained the perfect grades. Things couldn’t be better, right? Wrong. Adele was not perfect. She spent all her free time in her room. She couldn’t do sports or after school activities because she attended mandatory meetings with her psychiatrist half the week and group meetings the other. She had to take ...
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I spotted all their tired souls Floating over fields of snow It was in the middle of December And truly this much I remember The glimmering specters of forsaken sun And long torn down spider webs ruined for fun Danced and mourned all equally Moving on like a silent sea So close to my window covered in frost And suddenly with a thought I was accost I saw how close to Death I sat With her painted black sleigh and Spanish veiled hat While by my side you lay asleep Such a lively countenance you k...
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I spotted all their tired souls Floating over fields of snow It was in the middle of December And truly this much I remember The glimmering specters of forsaken sun And long torn down spider webs ruined for fun Danced and mourned all equally Moving on like a silent sea So close to my window covered in frost And suddenly with a thought I was accost I saw how close to Death I sat With her painted black sleigh and Spanish veiled hat While by my side you lay asleep Such a lively countenance you k...
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I loved it! I like how you refer to your mind as a file cabinet. How you collect little bits of information about people you see of meet. It's wonderful. And I like how you talked about going to Africa and Rome. I'm excited to read some more of your work.
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When I first started reading this story I was like, what the heck is going on. As the story progressed I was hooked. There were parts where at first I thought George was too unbelievably oblivious to the outside world and the feelings of the general public to be true. Then I realized that there ARE people in the world like that. This story provokes serious thought on what would happen if this crowd was on, say, Bill Gates doorstep. The scene with the homeless man and the orange cap was great....
I like how it never tells you exactly what the taste is. It hints at it by describing the flavor but never outright says it. I liked the rhyme scheme. It was kind of bouncy in contrast to the words which was great. Good job!
Gave me goosebumps. I loved it! Especially how it just ends with the word rest because thats how angry, traumatizing things really end. The part about watching T.V. and showing scars makes the poem more realistic as does the part where you talk about the person being strong and gaunt. I think most people don't realize that even though most cutters are scared it takes a lot of strength and bravery to do that. The poem rocks. Keep up the good work.
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