DresdenCarter's profile

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AGE: 22
LOC: Amherst, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 14

(scratching my head and staring into the ceiling)
What can I say about me? I love to write; I love to edit. I love words and the effects they achieve when you combine them.

I’m mellow, and homely. I’m pretty cool – I think. I wanna try writing a novel with someone else, see how it feels.

I can be crazy – have a jump off a  cliff, and then have a chat with my good mates. We meet in a pub, and just be the bohemians we are.

I don’t drink or smoke, and I love music.

I’m free-writing…. anything specific please ask me.

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4 Reviews   4 Comments
Sigh... Yes or No. Are we gonna remain friends or not? Yes or No. I give you the power to break or keep us. A simple Yes or No! I don't want ambivalence, just Yes or No!  
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Flash Fiction / The Syntax of a Break-up
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11 Reviews   14 Comments
Dear Damian,      I need a man who knows what love is all about. You are benevolent and compassionate. People who are completely different from you admit to being incompetent and a disappointment. Oh, you have ruined me for other men. I crave for you! I have absolutely no feelings when we are away from each other. I am ecstatic – will you let me be yours?                                  ...
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Short Story / FaceSpace Miss Tell
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Dear God Sandi, Where do you come up with these things? It is simply sublime. I enjoyed the trip inside the POV's brain - It was fun and disturbing at the same time. Question: "And erase every trail your introspective thoughts have ever been" - This line threw me off, because it didn't match the internal rhyme and overall rhythmic scheme of the poem. Could explain what you were trying to say/do here? "That’s your tomb over there by the babbling brook/ I signed your name in the “loving memory”...
Young Adult / Kayla
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Hey Sandi, I thoroughly enjoyed your journal/diary - it felt as if I was reading a juicy memoir. Let me say that I loved the way you presented Matt - he was very real and very much a rounded charcter - flaws and all. The "Nachos" used as a motif for distraction form something you concioulsy and maybe subconconsciouly wish to avoid? "...started rehashing the whole plot of the English Patient." - You should have cut out his tounge! The nerve of him! LMAO The paragraph starting with "Suddenly I ...