DresdenCarter's profile

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AGE: 21
LOC: Amherst, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 04

(scratching my head and staring into the ceiling)
What can I say about me? I love to write; I love to edit. I love words and the effects they achieve when you combine them.

I’m mellow, and homely. I’m pretty cool – I think. I wanna try writing a novel with someone else, see how it feels.

I can be crazy – have a jump off a  cliff, and then have a chat with my good mates. We meet in a pub, and just be the bohemians we are.

I don’t drink or smoke, and I love music.

I’m free-writing…. anything specific please ask me.

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Be a slave to be Great !
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July 19, 2008 If you want to be good at something, you practice. If you want to be great, then you have to do more than practice: you have to become a slave to it. Everyday, every chance you get, you train and develop. Work until you feel you can go no more, then you go some more. You do until your body breaks. I want to be a great writer. I don’t want other people to think I’m a great writer. I want to think I’m a great writer. I want to capture every motion, scene, and sense, as it is in my...
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Flash Fiction / The Unhuman war.
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7 Reviews   12 Comments
At the dawn of creation everything was perfect. Perfect until sin was found in perfection: You were the model of perfection, Full of wisdom and perfect in beauty. You were the anointed cherub, for so I ordained you. You were blameless in your ways From the day you were created, Till wickedness was found in you. There was war. A war between the angels, their most despised enemy and a third of the stars that followed him. The tide of anger and retribution spilled unto the earth causing the corr...
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Quotes / My Love: indefinable, I think.
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Love is Infinite. It is not bounded by our minds. It is not certain that it is a fixed quantity that never changes or evolves. It is arcane and unfathomable. Like the universe, like YHWH, it cannot be defines. To define love is to take the very meaning from it. If you can define love: put a limit on it, then it no longer is love.
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Novel Treatments / My future Mistake
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9 Reviews   13 Comments
They give me this journal to write in. Yesterday, a doctor gave me a pen. My daddy says never to accept things form strangers. This is an exception. ‘Write anything,’ the psychiatrist tells me, smiling sympathetically. ‘Write about you.’ I smile at her and continue to stare at the diamond pattern tiles. Daddy says there is one place a gentleman should never be: a police station, but this is an exception. I look down the long and narrow, brightly lit hall in front of me. The door at the end i...
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Humor/Satire / 6 Word Memoir
by Ceridwen
Hey stranger, I loved what you wrote. The contrast between summer and ice is both brilliant and profound.
Criticism / The Reality of Urbis
by vikingpoet
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Flash Fiction / Atherton's Tale (beginning)
by lostthunder
Hey stranger, YES it does grab me. OH MY GOD, MAN...GREAT job! There was just two problems I found with this sentence:"Innocence projects lack of guilt in one form ar another." - are is missing an 'e'. And the 's' sound destroys the Euphony(soothing pleasant sound) of the sentence. I almost bit my tongue, or maybe it's because I'm recovering form lisp tongue. Lol. Apart from that no other conventional errors i can see. I CRAVE more. I NEED to know more. This is GOING to be a really great piec...
Flash Fiction / 6 Word Contest
by squarehopper
I think the piece is not paralleled. Mated and procreated is kinda the same. Maybe you could change the second part to: Stories germinating/incubating? Choose the one the ties in with the theme of birth. D.C
Poetry / extinction depiction
by BlueDemoness
Hey stranger, Poetry is not my forte, but I liked this one, because of the subject - I'm a bit macabre, and the message of regret that you had done nothing "substantial" - I think so all the time of myself. Death is the theme, right? I love the message, but the construction was a bit loopy. I think it would be better in the Past tense. It would augment the theme, and also makes for easier reading, based on the topic. "...emotionally. Mentally. ..." - lines like these are jilting for me. It th...
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