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AGE:
19
LOC: Webster, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 12
LOC: Webster, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 12
About me
Well
I’ll write a book some day
To spill it all
But Honestly
I perfer to be down to earth
Explore every angle of everyside
Dig deep
But be able to pull out
Believe that theres more to people then meets the eye
Great quote i heard
“If you keep seeing people as Black and White, Then you’ll never see there true colors”...
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When you hold her hand, Can you read her mind? When "that" moment finds you Do you pause and feel her breath under your chin? Face to face and her eyes sink, Will you take advantage? Or will you give her a "simlpe" kiss? For a moment you don't care How your hair looks How shiny are yor shoes How many layers you wear. You can feel a nerve dance of her lips Your racing now Your eyes meet Once more you feel a "Pilgrims "kiss"...
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One word Just one word One answer One feeling One action One word One death One birth One world One "Grace" One ambition One thought One word Just one word One teacher One pastor One adulterous One sinner One word Just one word One religion One culture One dance One slide One word Just one word "LIFE" One word
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"How do you become a victor without having victimes, How do you stand tall without standing on others?"
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Is it me Or is it just what my eyes see? Is it me Or when time comes my words do not speak? Is it me Or are "we" all a bit insane? Is it me Or Do we all have to go through brimestone to reach a "greener" side? Is it me Or is it my weak words? Is it me Or is it "You"? It is me Or when you read my "little" words your mind drifts and your "heart" wonders? Is it me? Is it me? Is it me? And then a silance.... No words, no heart beat No more A pause... My alarm goes of Time to LIVE Not just be ALIV...
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"How do you become a victor without having victumes, How do you stand tall without standing on others?"
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I sense the feeling your trying to express.... I just need to believe it... "Fate" You seem to be expressing the same mood again and again Its good But When reading i can't hear your voice So I need to "feel" the words Sounds like a split decision between Lovers staying together or going there ways.. Brings up a point... Is it fate that we should worry about?? Or is it our own insecurity??? Keep going tough expamd more Let me "Feel" the words Rather then just reading them Cause I can feel an ...
Interesting It feels like you have more to say But are held back Expand your thought Feels a little confusing Focus on the point ur trying to make Its good Work it out Write it couple times Look for words you wish to express more "powerfully" It gives of a sense of something is still coming.. Thats good...
Emotional... Wow... Many could relate to these words.. I guess "We" all at times need a hiding place. A shoulder A graceful word A Friend You konw its interesting.. Your words remind me of how we rather point fingers and fill each other with bullets rather then cook a meal for a Brother or sister.. Just a thought.... But if u "Hide" And cry all day And let ur self slip into this "Oppresion" Then.. Well you'll be signing this song for centuries.... But it sends a message and thats the respect....
"Unspoken" Words are replaced by meaningless pleasures just a one night stand pointless, meaningless, When reading.. One feels "spite" At once a nutral feeling of why am i here again?? This place this "dresser" This person interesting confusion again and again And yet "Do I LOVE"?? Or am i in LOVE with the idea of being in love????
This piece gives of a frightful feel To which also makes one think of "Ocean Fronts" cleverly expressed... But for those who think more logicaly then with an open-ended mind could become a bit confusing. Next time try to build more upon it.. It seems to flow and then when a "peak" is reached a "cliffhanger" is forced One feels a bit rushed when reading Like trying to run towards something... But the end draws a point... Calms you down.. Sort of brings "you" back to thge begining.. "skipping s...
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