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LOC: Ferndale, WA
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LAST LOGIN: June 07
LOC: Ferndale, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 07
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Shedding Heat It’s good to ruffle our feathers now and again. Bury ourselves with our own deep and dirty down. Festered feathers the a fraction of the kind outwardly shown, the hottest pins which have kept us warm, pillow around us like a show of shed dominance…. “See, I can make a bigger mess than you can!”
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Something Stinks Reeking dirty yellow, a power pole sweats creosote in a sidewalk pit, staples stubbling a third the way. Atomic Acid bleeds their Mr. Yuck logo on a sun blistered flyer two weeks after their gig. Callouts curl all over each other for the ripest spot boasting 'THIRTY POUNDS LOST IN THIRTY DAYS' from dialing 1-800, while a self-professed Best Roommate flags his number for you to rip-off and ring.
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A Pacific Motion Picture Entering Semi-Ah-Moo spit trailing a Straits Salish, she previewed a speckled heron egg projected over the sky-dome. Clutched within seagrass, bunches of petal Dots tempted her, melting from a popped sun. Ushering the aisle, pygmy bunnies chair hopped from stump to stone while her feet ground a maraca pebble-and-shell track. The sea shushed, chomping at its seaweed cud. Jutted elders, frozen in salute, were patrolled by Haliaeetus who halted her pass. Petrified oak bo...
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Petrified by the Poet I was a second or third grade Whitman Elementary student when, through some scholastic memo, my mother was notified that a children's author was coming to my school for a reading. Being more wound up by the news than me at the time, she rummaged for my only copy of one of his books. Book-cover missing and pages stained by dirty Kool-Aid smudged fingers; she packed it into my back-pack, giving me strict instructions to get an autograph. Even though I was unfamiliar with t...
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Their pudgy heads smoosh against the window of the world in awe of radio flying air waves wisped around finger painted farms and block built buildings. The cheeky brood squish tighter for a clearer view. Condensed in croons and whimpers, they salivate for a taste of tornado eye candy. While pooling there exasperations, thing turn dark. They start counting their heaven pennies and hawk their silver linings for lightning bolts to shatter the barometric separation. Unfortunately, what is clear i...
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Wrapped around this very theological depiction are subtle suggestions that I'm not sure I'm getting a firm grip of. This seems mostly to explore what it is to be a good/evil woman and where the narrator feels she is in that scope of things. It tends to suggest at the latter being the daughter of Lilith and how things 'can't be helped'. I think there is more to this given the specifics of the grandfather and ash. Clay comes from ash and such the relation to the grandfather but the continuing s...
My immediate thought was, how did Eric get so lost so quickly. Did they just recently move and he wasn't as sure of his surroundings or something along those lines. I wondered, given the suggestion of Eric being 'so delighted to have a sister who loved him so much' if they were siblings by marriage and maybe had recently moved. He didn't seem at all distressed or disoriented in his surrounds at the every bigging of this piece and yet all it took was a clap of thunder to leave him helplessly l...
I think we would a get a better understanding and appreciation of this self destructive episode if we knew a bit more about what Angel and Ronald's relationship was from before. We know that she was able to keep the secret of her childhood from him and that he wanted to have children and she didn't but was it really all smooth sailing? What situation ignited her dramatic outburst? Was she served divorce papers or just proclaiming to give him up as she felt she couldn't satisfy him with childr...
Wonderfully depicted! A wanton brush fire is like a woman in heat. Fire is part of what they need to rejuvenate, I believe anyway. I might be wrong on that one though. The imagery of the bony-leg branches and grassy skirt are dead on almost giving this a exotic feel along with the vegetation terms. I can't think of a nit for this. Great read!
I know from my own experience that simply realizing that someone is awake in my house wakes me out of concern more than any sounds they make no matter how loud or minimal. It's the fact that there is an unrest that keeps me up. There is something about that kind of restlessness that I sense in this piece although you might not have meant to have people read that into this piece. Still it was something I picked up on in my reading. I enjoyed its simplicity just the same.
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