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AGE: 37
LOC: New Zealand
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 01

My training and experience is in journalism. For most of my career, I have been a subeditor on daily newspapers in New Zealand, London and Samoa. Currently I am a freelance journalist and publicist. I also write fiction – poems mainly although I consider some of these abstracts for upcoming short stories and novels.

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Poetry / Two women
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Two Women Two women were pulling Two women were pushing Pulling pushing Pushing pulling You took my husband, you maile. Eat shit Save me, mercy But who could have mercy on a woman who sneaks into a fale like a rumour and steals a man as if he was a pair of jandals? Two women were punching Two women were kicking Punching kicking Kicking punching Like WWF - village styles Who cheer their hero to fight fight fight And blood doesn’t matter. It’s not real. Is it? You can sleep with him at night Bu...
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Inner bark imperfections spoil Samoans had no mats Arrives a Fijian dowry Siapo mamanu Siapo ‘upeti Smooth wooden beaters Dyes sapped from trees She was a stately woman Seldom speaking, often inspired I remember watching her Dividing space, placing symbols Rubbing dye from o’a Kolone Fai’ivae Leoso Died in 1970 Awaiting a revival Siapo going cheap Old forgotten designs Repeated and rearranged On textured flat u’a Twelve notes in an octave Make a balanced mosaic A woman makes a cut One continu...
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Tentacles climb over over Over over Mary Mary who cannot see Not hear, not feel And not fear Come fe’e, come She calls him Like he is a pig pig pig I see one who is old and grey Grey and fragile Falealupo calling So off he goes to find This old man falling Into death he is lying In a fale embraced by his wife Begging for time time time Crying beneath the graceless moon Sleep overcomes her So Fe’e slips slowly under The old man’s bed Embraces him And loves him And loves him And leaves him dead.
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Poetry / Two women
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Two women were pulling Two women were pushing Pulling pushing Pushing pulling You took my husband, you maile. Eat shit Save me, mercy But who could have mercy on a woman who sneaks into a fale like a rumour and steals a man as if he was a pair of jandals? Two women were punching Two women were kicking Punching kicking Kicking punching Like WWF - village styles Who cheer their hero to fight fight fight Blood doesn’t matter It's only Hollywood You can sleep with him at night But you can’t stay ...
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Journalism / The Ancient Way
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5 Reviews   4 Comments
To properly explore the art of Fatu Feu’u, a little background music may be appropriate. It helps if you take a limited number of tapa motifs; treat them as if they were musical notes in an octave and there you have the makings of multiple melodies and harmonies. And just like the beats in a bar dictating the musical tempo, so too, size and frequency of motifs determine the rhythm in a tapa grid. With the grid providing a stave for composition, Feu’u has not only used and re-used motifs he ha...
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Children's / Meet BB and Sissy
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Lyrics / No Title
I think the change came too suddenly from outspread wings to them being stoned. - not sure about that "just got stoned" line either because it seems like a much too random act. It's a bit of a rollercoaster ride if you follow all the ups and downs, buts and ands.
Children's / Monster Under The Bed
The story line is amusing and entertaining. But the rhythm falters and I would recommend reading this out loud to get rid of the extra beats (unless you want them in there). I would also suggest changing monster to something specific and perhaps less scary for children... something novel like a toad/gnome... still like this one though!
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Children's / The Frog Prince
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Lyrics / hero
I really like the second verse because it brought a sense of grounded reality to the opening verse/chorus. I was interested on how it might develop as a story with finding the grail. however, I felt it ended too abruptly, and that really there is an epic tale here that could take us on a wondrous ride instead of a quick fix. Aside from that, the words "drop-kick" seems a bit modern for this tale. :)
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