EMMANITRATE's profile

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AGE: 39
LOC: Spain
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 23

I enjoy writing, and making people laugh with it, I come from London but live in spain now, have three kids, painting is another hobbie of mine,I would love feedback positive or very possitive,maybe a little neg but would cry from really neg.
Hope you can enjoy my stuff.

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Young Adult / THE CONTENDER
Version 2
23 Reviews   9 Comments
From what he was, to what he later became. The leap was a sheeeeeeeeear drop. Involved in life, to shadow, self abuse vice. Once a hero,then a dreg, when did it all fall through. This walking former, then depressed craved loner. A contendr till the last. I remember the shiner, star filled future. Layed out before his gold filled path.
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Poetry / Match
Version 1
1 Review   1 Comment
I lose my fear, The warmth in his eyes told me that we wasn't over his touch started my sweet juices f l o w i n g. I was in tingly heaven. Ooh lah lah. Becoming childlike, but passion driven Lust thrust pulsing he makes me feel alive. I dont want to end his space feels like home. Molding ,spooning yes a perfect match.
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Version 5
3 Reviews   2 Comments
Staying out drinking wine. Pumping music lets take a line. Nothing mattered. When we were in our prime. Was that a crime?? It started friday around about six. Baby sitters sorted we drop off our kids. See you later the chosen phrase. Little did our mums know they wouldn't see us for days. Nothing mattered. When we were in our prime. Was that a crime?? The butterflies in our stomaches kept on growing. Our fuelled horizons, no red lights no slowing. No sign, when will it end nobody knew and nob...
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Version 4
0 Reviews   0 Comments
Staying out drinking wine. Pumping music lets take a line. Nothing mattered. When we were in our prime. Was that a crime?? It started friday around about six. Baby sitters sorted we drop off our kids. See you later the chosen phrase. Little did our mums know they wouldn't see us for days. Nothing mattered. When we were in our prime. Was that a crime?? The butterflies in our stomaches kept on growing. Our fuelled horizons, no red lights no slowing. No sign, when will it end nobody knew and nob...
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Version 3
0 Reviews   0 Comments
Staying out drinking wine. Pumping music lets take a line. Nothing mattered. When we were in our prime. Was that a crime?? It started friday around about six. Baby sitters sorted we drop off our kids. See you later the chosen phrase. Little did our mums know they wouldn't see us for days. Nothing mattered. When we were in our prime. Was that a crime?? The butterflies in our stomaches kept on growing. Our fuelled horizons, no red lights no slowing. No sign, when will it end nobody knew and nob...
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Poetry / Blue Wind
I ENJOYED READING THIS PEICE, THE STRONG DESCRIPSION OF THE ARRIVAL OF WINTER AND ALL THE FRESHNESS THAT IT BRINGS TO CANADA. IT MAKES ME WANT TO EXPERIENCE THE COLD AND FEEL THE BLUE WIND, WELL WRITTEN. I TOO LOVE THE COMING WINTER.
Poetry / Stone
I ENJOYED THE IMAGERY, MOTHER NATURE CONTROLLING THE SEASONS BUT NOT THE STONE, WONDER PHRASES, SHE PLAYS HER SONG ON NATURES INSTRUMENT AND ANCIENT LULLABY OF SURRENDER. A RICH POEM, COLOURFUL DESCRIPTIONS. EXCELLENT
Poetry / Me and Bommer
VERY MOVING YOU NEARLY HAD ME IN TEARS, GOOD USE OF WORDS, STRAIGHT TO THE POINT AND NO NONSENSE. DID YOUR DAD REALLY DIE LIKE THAT? HOW OLD ARE YOU IN THE POEM. I THINK THE POEM WOULD MAKE GREAT LYRICS TOO. WELL DONE
Very mature work for somebody so young, its incredible. ,Age is my favourite myth times the real killer in this, that is so true i love that and so you better wear your sunday dress, cause friday night is coming up. You have lots of potential and I really enjoyed reading this peice well done.
Poetry / Daddy
Enjoyed reading your work, it reminded me of my story, I never met my father untill I was 19 so the line at the start ,like reaquainting a lonely foolto a hole in the wall, I really related to. I think you have great potential keep it up.
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