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AGE: 39
LOC: Madison, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 06

I am a family man. True to my friends. Truer to my writing. I have said many times to know me is to not understand the madness that drives me. But if you are my friend I will stand by your side till Hell freezes over

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*Prologue* “Trimmel…put that chair down, before you break something!” Max demanded forcefully. “You could get a splinter…we’ll have to pay for damages…someone’s going to jail before the night is─” he didn’t get a chance to finish ranting; a stein collided with the back of his head violently, he went down like a sack of grain. Trimmel grinned; he loved to fight, almost as much as he loved women. With a loud roar he smashed his heavy wooden chair into the back of the person closet to him, it w...
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Try To Understand A sonnet for my lady as I sit and watch you sleep. Inside you hold our baby it needs both you and me I know that you are scarred don’t know what to do. Know that I’m prepared to a loving life with you. Our parents will adjust and accept us for who we are. In time they’ll learn to deal with it for lives they can’t control. I’ll always stand beside you hold you safe and tight. Build a life completely new construct it just for you. When our child is all grown up can we accept t...
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Kingdom Salvation Diagnosis Imprisoned Trapped Cannot see Wolves beckon outside your door Desire…feed on your soul. Justice…held in check if you have the cash. Man hunt Witch hunt Posse clan Outlaws’ nightmare Witness the birth of a nightmare Hell set free Feel the undertow The constant icy pull Seeking Longing For justice No-mans’ land To lie is to murder Deception is the game Innocence is the victim Kingdom salvation take me away. © Earl Lee Daniels
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Poetry / Heartache
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Heartache The beginning My heartache started as a child. Dubbed a mistake Labeled too wild. Solidly constructed Veiled and silent walls behind them I hide. Still I would listen and watch my friends die. Took down the walls Time to time… Scared and frightened. Rebuilding took time weak and broken. Deep within my solitude Learn to love the pain. The roar Deafening silence The walls must remain. Look to man in vain For answers pray to God for peace. Still I my world crumbles heart cries out in ...
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Poetry / Dream Evil
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Dream Evil Can you remember when the dream began? Can you feel fear close at hand? Sometimes when you’re alone do you feel someone near? I’m the one you feel I’m the one you fear. One black widow twelve black roses pain and death…inevitable let the dream begin as the day closes. Demons haunt you forever in body and in mind. Quiet prayer upon your grave the demons will not be kind. Every person has a silent fear kept only to themselves. Silent fears…strong and evil work to cause your death. Wh...
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I find this piece to be well written in most places, but I do want to bring attention to the fact that you're using the same words in back-to-back lines and this practice throws your reader off. Consider whittling down the use of unnecessary words like and and where. Try this as an example: Losing money playing black jack at the poker table Failing at various attempts to play piano almost like that pretty song you pirated off the internet. It’s a giant web that catches you. Feeling like you’...
Poetry / Check Out Girls
I actually found myself getting into this poem. That's rare for me to have enjoyed something that is as leading as this poem is. I seem to be able to connect with poems that are a bit more vague and allow me to come to myown conclusions. Good work
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Just another day....
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Poetry / Moments In Time~
I have to tell you that this poem has strog merrits, yet you seriously need to look at it again with fresh eyes. There are far too many lines that start with "the" and it's very distracting from what I know you're trying to acheive. Here's an example: As time passes on the clock The sand washes away from the beach The sun reminds the day has past The memories remain Only in the mind of the beholder The night brings a chill The air is a presence playing I have learned over the years that to c...
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Haiku/Senryu / Dark Haiku Colection
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