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My head feels like it’s swollen. Throbbing endlessly. Tears burn as they flow down redden cheeks - Sodium streaks of painful memories, Though everything now looks so gray; Gray, All save for the scars. Open and corroding, Pouring free with seemingly forgotten pain. Do you know what it’s like to be me? Do you love to see what I see? Shimmering darkness among a lighter shade. (False soul - False pain.) Everyday is another test I put myself through, Another chasm of reality I force myself to jum...
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A soft, yet hazy smile crept along her face. His heart beat. Dreams of a new life, spellbinding in her mind – as the blade sang a sorrowful tune. Her body shuddered; her body burned, yet she didn’t move. His frantic coughing, gentle tugging – it did nothing to distract her, even when his lips turned blue. Sinking into the tossing waves of crimson; the lamp’s glow her only vision, warm as a loving embrace as she escaped all pain and fell into darkness once more. He stood above her now. This an...
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*Blinks so slowly* Again, I'm stunned at your imgination in your craft, the words that you choose to spin in your web of a tale.. are simply amazing. God, if you ever come out with a book I promise you I'll be the first one to get it. I may sound like I'm kissing your butt about it, but I don't care. I mean it. Thank you again for capturing my mind in your story. Poor Margaret.
Holy wow.. I could only wish to be as detailed in my stories as this peice of work, in other words I'm both jealous and in love with this story. >.< I've read alot of your work so far, lol, and I feel the same way about every peice. You should really think about getting alot of this work published, I'm pretty sure you'd make it big-time easily. Thank you so much for posting it. I'm off to read more! By the way, I really loved this line. It's what caught my eye in the first place: The st...
Lmao. I still love this story, sisser. It's so gruesome! I love the way you write and come up with this stuff. You have such a wonderful imagination. I remember how you came up with this too. XD We were all on conquer, telling stories back and forth and you decided to tell that one. Everyone went silent after that, but I was laughing my butt off. Again, I can't wait to see your next story! From what I've read, (in a personal sneak-preview, HAHA I GOT TO SEE IT AND YOU GUYS DIDN'T!) eet ist go...
I've felt like this before, and have done things like that before, so this poem really reached me on a level that is hard to get to as a person. Your words flowed effortlessly, and the words chosen for such weren't in strain. This is a very good peice of work, and you should really think about getting published. I can't wait to read more from you. Thank you for posting.
Wow, this is an amazing peice of work. I love the detail, and especially like this: Through causeless doubt and written mud – ancient anxieties born in the blood. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more from you. ^.^
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