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USED JAZZ: an Eddy Curant Story Chapter One Eddy leaned against the wall of the restaurant above the Texaco gas station and stared at his shoes. The black Converse All Star High tops seemed to hold the power to keep his fits of giggling under control. “Shut up! Gezz,” chirped Peter James as he peered around the corner of their elevated vantage point. From here they could see the entire parking lot of the strip mall. Jo Ann’s Pet Emporium, next to a dry cleaners which was next to a game store ...
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USED JAZZ: an Eddy Curant Story Chapter One Eddy leaned against the wall of the restaurant above the Texaco gas station and stared at his shoes. The black Converse All Star High tops seemed to hold the power to keep his fits of giggling under control. “Shut up! Gezz,” chirped Peter James as he peered around the corner of their elevated vantage point. From here they could see the entire parking lot of the strip mall. Jo Ann’s Pet Emporium, next to a dry cleaners which was next to a game store ...
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I'd like to think that a writter lives one life, while documenting thousanends, but I totaly see your point. Good insight, keep it up! EC
First of all I am not a poet critique, I’m just some dude. So please keep that in mind when you read this. I had difficulty trying to give these words meaning to me. It seems to me that there is drug addled sex that results in pregnancy and then abandonment of a kind. I am not sure what you meant by some of the lines and at first read I though “WTF Mate?” After a few additional reads I began to pick up on some images that explained a bit more of what the work could have been about. There are ...
First of all I am not a poet critique, I’m just some dude. So please keep that in mind when you read this. I liked the way you used the short intro to describe the angry dad, the brooding mother and their marriage. Short and concise. I would have liked to get more of and in-depth perspective on how the child felt other than fear and mimicry. Good one, keep it up. EC
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