ElFaught has no favorites yet.
ElFaught's profile
AGE:
46
LOC: Nocona, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 30
LOC: Nocona, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 30
I am new to writing poetry. I guess it blossomed out of pain associated with a divorce. When I began to write, I wrote with my future wife in mind. Now that I have married her, I write out of my love and passion for her.
At any rate, I found this site through myspace. I would love to get some good, sound feed back from you all as you read my poems. I’ll put more on my site when I can. If you feel the desire to contact me, please feel free to do so at medic181@aim.com. I hope to hear from you all soon. Until then, take care and God bless you.
Wayne :)
Items
Version 1
2 Reviews
0 Comments
Withdrawn, I review my distant past Pondering loves that did not last I felt to be a cause that was lost Discarding caution; careless of cost My soul became a hollow labyrinth I felt wasted. My life, over spent As the night greets the sun So my soul enraptured by one, A loving muse. Sing to my soul A song of love only we know A song eliciting love and lust Reveal your loins and your bust After dawn light breaks forth And my seed had been poured Drying sweat, salty yet sweet Exhausted bodies a...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 2
2 Reviews
0 Comments
Craddled clothes held tightly to her chest Moist sheets laying underneath her head His scent craved by her every breath Her longing is met by a stark reality "He will never come back home to me." Her tears flow like a flooded stream Reaching for more clothes. No, his scent Anger and crushing pain is deeply pent Within her interior. She is spent. Death is a sure and obscure foe Who will usher a shattering woe To us all; the young and the old The agony brings knees to chest Coping is what someo...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 2
3 Reviews
0 Comments
To express what I long to say A telling of my turbulent soul Words, too often, are at bay I can’t say what I know The depth of my longing To speak an accurate word Eludes me. They’re evading Simple utterances, backward Oh awkward language that I speak Allow me one sincere phrase That I may speak bold, not weak Thus shower her with praise To tell of her glorious beauty To speak of her wonderful ways Her smile, to me, is bounty Her body renders me crazed How can I speak to my Dove? Her ways are...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 2
3 Reviews
0 Comments
You've reached into my soul Mending all the broken parts The shattered has become whole A beautiful, mosaic art. No more shards of emotion A healing has taken place My soul is beauty in motion I'm restored because of grace Glass smooth is my soul now Beautiful to its beholder Please see the cracks throughout They tell of my caring lover
Ratings & Rankings
Version 2
3 Reviews
0 Comments
Just once, I want to see the radiance of your face The beauty of your skin as you lay beneath the lace. I want to taste the sweetness of your lips, And have the knowledge of love’s first kiss. I want to feel the softness of your tender skin, As I caress it with my gentle, loving hand. I want to smell your scent, and knowing where I’ve been, Get utterly lost in you once again. Just once, I want to get to know you, To see you, to taste you, to smell you. If only I could…just once
Ratings & Rankings
[ View all items ]
Reviews
Thank you for giving me to opportunity to review your work. It's an honor. In the second line of the first stanza, you use the word phrase "In the mist of my waking". Did you intend to use the word "mist" or "midst"? That's a very creative use of the word "wafting". Usually, when someone is wafting, the first thing I think of is when someone is wafting their fart. ;-) hahaha OK Back to being serious. When you use the line, "I drift towards the cloud that is my memory" did you consider using a...
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
First, thank you for allowing me to review your work. I appreciate the opportunity. When I started reading this, it came across to me as simply a prayer. Especially when I read your opening line, "Lord bless my children. I ask you this they are precious and innocent." I know that these have got to be the very same words that countless of parents have uttered. I saw that you didn't have any instruction for those who are to review your work. Did you intend for this to be a poem or not? If so, I...
HAHAHAHAHA......you did that on purpose! You KNOW we all were expecing you to write "titties". You definitely put a smile on my face when I read this one. Thanks for the laugh. :-D Good job. I wouldn't change a thing. KUDOS!!!
Thank you for putting your poetry for us to see. I greatly appreciate the opportunity. The first thing I noticed while I was reading your poem was that you seem to be speaking about something through some one else's experiences. Does that make sense? I'm merely asking you to convince me that this love you have is "all that and a bag of chips." You begin with: "Never knew there was love like this Never thought it would find me even if it really did exist always thought I would end up lonely Th...
[ View all reviews ]
Favorites
People
