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AGE:
47
LOC: Nocona, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 16
LOC: Nocona, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 16
I am new to writing poetry. When I began to write, I wrote with my future wife in mind. Now that I have married her, I write out of my love and passion for her.
At any rate, I found this site through myspace. I would love to get some good, sound feed back from you all as you read my poems. I’ll put more on my site when I can. I hope to hear from you all soon. Until then, take care and God bless you.
Wayne :)
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By: E. Wayne Faught May 25, 2007 I long to forever look into your eyes as tears wash the windows of your soul Assuring me that your heart is mine from now until time forever rolls. Your precious eyes beckon my heart, calling for it to be calm and still Wanting me complete, not shattered in parts. With a passion, I say, “I will.” Speak to my soul, sweet, calling eyes for after you I forever yearn. No longer will I chase uttered h...
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By: E. Wayne Faught May 25, 2007 If I could forever look into your eyes as tears wash the windows of your soul assuring me that your heart is mine From now until time for ever rolls. Your precious eyes beckon my heart They call for it to be calm and still Wanting me complete, not shattered in parts. With a passion, I speak, “I will.” Speak to my soul, sweet, calling eyes For after you I forever yearn. No longer will I chase hollow uttered hollow lies ...
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By: E. Wayne Faught May 25, 2007 If I could forever look into the eyes as tears wash the windows of your soul assuring me that your heart is mine From now until time for ever rolls. Those precious eyes beckon my heart They call for me to be calm and still They want me complete, not in part. My voice cries from the hills. “I will.” Speak to my soul, sweet, calling eyes For after you I will forever yearn. No longer chasing spoken, hollow lies You will teach me. From you I ...
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Withdrawn, I review my distant past Pondering loves that did not last I felt to be a cause that was lost Discarding caution; careless of cost My soul became a hollow labyrinth I felt wasted. My life, over spent As the night greets the sun So my soul enraptured by one, A loving muse. Sing to my soul A song of love only we know A song eliciting love and lust Reveal your loins and your bust After dawn light breaks forth And my seed had been poured Drying sweat, salty yet sweet Exhausted bodies a...
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Craddled clothes held tightly to her chest Moist sheets laying underneath her head His scent craved by her every breath Her longing is met by a stark reality "He will never come back home to me." Her tears flow like a flooded stream Reaching for more clothes. No, his scent Anger and crushing pain is deeply pent Within her interior. She is spent. Death is a sure and obscure foe Who will usher a shattering woe To us all; the young and the old The agony brings knees to chest Coping is what someo...
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First, thank you for giving me the opportunity to review your work. I greatly appreciate it. When I started reading your work, almost immediately, it begin to grab me. It was subtle, at first. But, by the end, I was think, "I want more!" Good job. I see this is a story about a fractured home. There's infidelity, vulgarity, a teenager smoking, a crying son, and a disassociated mother. WOW! Sounds like home to me. ;-) It's a sad place when a teenager finds out that dad is cheating, and mom seem...
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Let me begin by saying thank you for giving me the opportunity to evaluate your poem. First, I see some repetition, such as, "dark", "darkness", and "Velvet black". So, you may want to see what you can do with that. Why does the darkness seem "velvet"? Velvet is fuzzy and feels good to the touch. Is the darkness comforting to the character? It's a good analogy to use "And I taste the silence". I have never considered using this. Good choice. :-) However, if the darkess is "bittersweet", why d...
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review your work. I greatly appreciate it. When I began to read your piece, I had to read it a few of times in order to begin to mentally digest it. When I began, I thought you were writing about a woman burying her face in the coat of her lover. "I whispered, 'I love you' And then, 'Goodbye'." Maybe a young woman had just taken her beau to the train station and he was getting ready to board. Then, it seemed as if you might be writing about a young m...
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